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29-10-2003, 04:56 | #1 |
daydreamer
Join Date: Jun 2003
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as slowly the night falls ( a poem)
Hello everybody! This is the firts time for me to post something i write in a forum. i usually post them on my site...it's not so much, a few verses i wrote on my management's class. I hope you'll like it
As slowly the night falls Fists ready to destroy the wall As the only tear reach the scars Madness fill the room Trust no one no more... Fate written in the star As slowly the night falls. Mute screams in your head Don't hide, don't you dare! The torture almost ends... You'll become numb, you'll faint blood keeps coming This won't last forever Everywhere is hell.. It's in your head, you are there Rage running through their veins As your body feels the pain Fate written in the stars As slowly the night falls... Wounded soul trying to crawl too many noise, just one sharp gasp Do you feel it? is almost here And angel is rising, don't you see? Bloody wings spreading as you first step in heaven Fists ready to destroy the wall Close your eyes and just wait You'll become numb An angel's rising As you slide your last tear fate written in the star you'll faint forever as slowly the night falls Cheers samegirl |
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[COLOR= "blue"]Hope is for those who still believe in dreams...[/color] things are getting desperate when all the boys can't be men everybody knows i'm her friend everybody knows i'm her man |
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29-10-2003, 08:15 | #2 | |
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niiice i liked this stanza the most:
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good stuff, hope to read more |
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29-10-2003, 08:26 | #3 | |
we shout
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Samegirl.. .. very nice
I love this part.. Quote:
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I will forget my dreams Nothing is what it seems I will effect you I will protect you From all the crazy schemes You traded in your wings For everything freedom brings You never left me You never let me See what this feeling means |
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29-10-2003, 15:20 | #4 |
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Join Date: Apr 2003
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*Very* strong emotions in this. I like it!
Please do post more. Parrish |
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