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26-10-2003, 03:06 | #21 |
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eh... i don't want to be one of this fanfics obssesed (only with alien urbano *waves*) but we are waiting here for you doc and lena410, this fics seems too good to leave it forgotten. please please mooore!!
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01-11-2003, 14:52 | #22 |
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That`s comforting to hear, Parrish.
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03-11-2003, 16:42 | #23 |
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Ok, so only chapter three is up. *laughs* Chapter four *is* written though. Just a little tweaking left.
Chapter three is titled "Distance". A nice flashback chapter. Parrish |
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03-11-2003, 17:00 | #24 |
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Oh yeah.. Chapter 3. Things are slowly starting to unfold and I'm sitting here being all fidigety hoping that chapter 4 gets tweaked soon. *thinks for a second* My last sentence sounds kinda funny.*l*
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03-11-2003, 18:03 | #25 |
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ooh i like chapter three! very nice imagery with the eyes and all. it all flows very well great work you two!
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03-11-2003, 21:10 | #26 |
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Ooo, I like silent conversations! Everything is possible in them. Just let your eyes and imagination do the work.
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03-11-2003, 22:58 | #27 |
think again....
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lena410 and parrish
tnx for the new chap...both of u r so busy and stil manage to gve us sme fresh chaps....agai, tnx.. |
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04-11-2003, 02:10 | #28 |
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i don't know about anyone else but this line right about does it for me, "silent conversation". when i read that, i was like......DAYUM!
nice! keep the good work up you 2! |
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05-11-2003, 08:20 | #29 |
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I'm late here too of course.
I already said it, but i love the pace of the writing! Those single lines standing out between paragraphs! You two are doing an amazing job. Lost in each other's eyes... They both have so incredibly beautiful eyes! It's really sad though to read about when they were falling in love knowing that it's gonna end so badly! |
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05-11-2003, 15:07 | #30 |
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it certanly is
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05-11-2003, 19:44 | #31 |
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It's good! really good. congratulations to you both!
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12-11-2003, 00:01 | #32 |
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wow, you guys sure do know how to keep gh in suspense!
what a cliffhanger! you guys are so wrong! thanx for the chapters you 2! |
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12-11-2003, 05:26 | #33 |
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*patiently waits to see who the father is*
Gotta love those cliffhangers. |
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12-11-2003, 07:56 | #34 | |
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Amazing work Parrish and Lena410! To repeat what you said 2 posts ago Parrish, it's truly worth the wait!
You're going to kill us with those cliffhangers. And with the flashbacks, that means that we have two timelines with cliffhangers simultaneously! Argh! You are evil! Quote:
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12-11-2003, 16:07 | #35 |
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I'm really happy that you liked this chapter and this whole story.
Thanks mir for putting it up and fixing it! haku. Parrish and me evil? never! *laughs evily* oops..I think I gave myself away..*cough* *runs out of thread* |
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23-11-2003, 08:05 | #36 |
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Chapter 5 is up. It's called "Getting to know each other".
sorry for the delay tell us what you think! *winks* |
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23-11-2003, 15:13 | #37 |
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Oh.. the feelings are still there. I hope they get together (as in seeing each other again) and talk. It doesn't really matter about what as long as they do.
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23-11-2003, 15:23 | #38 |
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Fantastic chapter, i felt so many emotions reading it! And once again, the way the chapter is structured is amazing. You two are creating a master piece.
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23-11-2003, 20:05 | #39 |
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"Can I be your Romeo?" LOL That just made me smile. For some reason I missed the last update so I just read the last two chapters. Great chapters Parrish and Lena410! It's great we have two wonderful authors working on a fic together. Lots of emotion in that last chapter and am glad to see that they still feel something for each other.
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25-11-2003, 02:09 | #40 |
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awwww, that is just too sweet!
so the feelings are still there huh? nice! good work lena and p. diddy! |
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