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09-12-2003, 05:03 | #1 |
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Not For Me -poem-
Not For Me
i see what you say displayed across the screen but it's not for me it's for mass consumption for the world to see no name, no disclaimer, simple in it's vagueness sinister in its possibilities feeble hope invades my heart where it shouldn't be when it comes to you because when it comes to you i've got nothing phantoms and shadows promises never made - only imagined i want to know once and for all but it's a question you'll never ask and a secret i'll never share. --fin. so this is sort of a companion to my other post (currently Untitled). this was actually written before the other, but both on the same day, so they follow the same emotions (thus the same color font, savvy? lol) alright, no more rambling from me. you know the drill. love it, hate it - comment! thanks - amikana |
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09-12-2003, 14:07 | #2 |
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I love this too .... and ... I dedicate this one for "you" .... ...
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I will forget my dreams Nothing is what it seems I will effect you I will protect you From all the crazy schemes You traded in your wings For everything freedom brings You never left me You never let me See what this feeling means |
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10-12-2003, 00:27 | #3 |
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I like this one too. I hate that you are feeling this way, but you express how you feel very well.
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[shrugs] i dunno, whatever. amikana |
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