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13-12-2003, 12:39
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t.A.T.u. Music Lover :)
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Location: Guam, USA
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Poem: "Changed"
I've had a serious creative block for months now. But tonight's events have struck a chord in my heart (I'm talking about the news of the t.A.T.u. documentary), and I was finally able to let some feelings flow.
I usually reflect on things every night before I head to bed, and I was reliving my initial reactions of shock to the news of Lena and Yulia's documentary (which I have not yet seen). The emotions hit me again, and I had to let them out. I love t.A.T.u., and am still a fan  No matter what their intentions were at the time, their past actions have touched me sincerely, and I look forward to what the future has in store for them  I'm posting this poem here, 'cause I feel that others may be able to relate to it. Now, on to the poem  I don't consider myself a poet at all, just someone who writes what they feel  -------------------------------------------------------------------- "CHANGED" by raven ryuu 12/13/2003 21:16 PM You really had me going, you... Made me believe You gave to me a new outlook And now you retreat Bring me up so high Now drown me We all bleed, and you're not different But I thought otherwise They all feed, and you give in Pedastalize I only want you to be you I'd never want for more Say you're one thing, then say you're not What's the difference? The lie's been bought Say you're with me, then stay away What's inside you? What made you change? I think you're beautiful, I do... Know you're a star It's not a life if there's no you you caught my heart Breathe life into me Now drown me Fill my thoughts, and fill my dreams with idealistic fodder I have grazed, and now I scream Murder There's something lost within me I want to understand Say you're one thing, then say you're not What's the difference? The lie's been bought Say you're with me, then stay away What's inside you? What made you change? Calculated moves still hurt in the end There's no more need to pretend No one's left here, maybe it's best to give up like all the rest |
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...:: found ::... still alive and loving the new album ^_^ Last edited by raven ryuu; 13-12-2003 at 14:07. |
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13-12-2003, 14:41
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Gimme some sugar!
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whoa...me likes a lot!
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14-12-2003, 01:00
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14-12-2003, 14:55
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Join Date: Apr 2003
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Very well written, and expresses what a *lot* of people are feeling.
Good job Raven. You should be proud of this one.Parrish |
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