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Old 20-11-2003, 17:58   #1
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My translation of STARS

Hello everyone! Please read my version of Stars. When I haven't got yet english album my imagination began to create its own things. So i translated Zachem Ya.

I. I'm a star, you are star
we were ordered to burn
Someone likes to betray
Our adress of born
Look at me, in my eyes
Can you take my cold hands
Take my heart for a while
To protect our lands
BE with you all my life-
Now i'm wondering how
Our souls are for love
And it's always and now
In the sky I want fly
To protect our lifes
Near you want to die
To discuss our cries.
Through my world only cold
Here are we for a time
Our souls we control
But not wondering why
We must revenge for us
For us and for death
It is not a surprise
That we can't understand
Everything is ok
We must fight to defeat
There are no angel things
So we can be free
Free from space
Free from land
But there is no place
Where you touch my hand and...

Chorus:
Tell me for what I wait the call...
For what the dumb clouds on my wall
Fly to my soul from far away
And melting....
For what the love touched our souls
For what I cry by first hellos
For what I want you just now...
Don't know...

II We perform our lifes
on the stage of the world
I look at your face
But withoutyou cold
Not to search, not to love,
Not to spare and sleep...
I will always love you
And my love is deep...
In the middle of life
We stay here alone
Between us is rain
That is a stone
We nee some much dope
But the pulse is no...
Your spirit is free
And the fault is in me...

So poor story...
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired.
(c)Robert Frost


Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen
Kann man uns am Himmel sehen
Wir haben Angst und sind allein
Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein
(c) Rammstein
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Old 20-11-2003, 18:11   #2
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belissa, I like it very much! Good job I like the line "And the fault is in me" alot.. It just sounds like.. very sad.

I sometimes make my own versions of songs too. Maybe I will post them oneday
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Old 21-11-2003, 17:04   #3
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QueenBee, thanks!!!

So what do another ppl here think about the poem???
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired.
(c)Robert Frost


Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen
Kann man uns am Himmel sehen
Wir haben Angst und sind allein
Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein
(c) Rammstein
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Old 29-11-2003, 15:52   #4
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ok...lets discuss it...i want your critics...please...
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired.
(c)Robert Frost


Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen
Kann man uns am Himmel sehen
Wir haben Angst und sind allein
Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein
(c) Rammstein
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Old 29-11-2003, 18:08   #5
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And I like this part very much!

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Look at me, in my eyes
Can you take my cold hands
-
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I will forget my dreams
Nothing is what it seems
I will effect you
I will protect you
From all the crazy schemes

You traded in your wings
For everything freedom brings

You never left me
You never let me
See what this feeling means
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Old 29-11-2003, 19:17   #6
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I like this:

"Near you want to die
To discuss our cries."
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Old 01-12-2003, 17:01   #7
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Tonight... I like this these lines:

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Through my world only cold
Here are we for a time
Our souls we control
But not wondering why
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I will forget my dreams
Nothing is what it seems
I will effect you
I will protect you
From all the crazy schemes

You traded in your wings
For everything freedom brings

You never left me
You never let me
See what this feeling means
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