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13-04-2003, 01:25 | #41 |
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"Fallen" is a movie with Denzel Washington. it's from 1995, i think. not sure though. maybe 1996. you should check it out. i am not gonna say anything more about it. and the way your fic starts it's similar to the way that movie starts. or maybe i am imagining things lol.
the red text colour is absolutely cool. it ain't bothering me. i don't think you should change it. it fits perfectly with the layout and the story keep it up! |
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13-04-2003, 11:19 | #42 |
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uhaku, you know I really liked it
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13-04-2003, 11:24 | #43 |
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thanks, fia! (((i can't stop writing now)))
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13-04-2003, 11:37 | #44 |
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Good, I'm looking forward to next part, so keep writing
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13-04-2003, 16:23 | #45 |
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Agree killa!!!
It's because the time secuence...it's familiar...it has some similarities ^^
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15-04-2003, 04:14 | #46 |
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havn't seen the movie yet, but will check it out. yeah, a lot of movies have non-linear narrative, which it happened to be the style i love. ^_^
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17-04-2003, 07:57 | #47 |
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sorrayyy, my editors have gone missing.......
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17-04-2003, 08:04 | #48 |
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lol i know what you mean Uhaku
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17-04-2003, 08:12 | #49 |
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oh, did u mean tranz?..cus u and him r writing the fanfic together, right??
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17-04-2003, 20:39 | #50 |
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mmm yes...but i cant just blame him cause i have been busy too.....
but oh well...that happens |
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19-04-2003, 07:05 | #51 |
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OK. part 6-7 r up. ^_^
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19-04-2003, 07:35 | #52 |
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ok i read 6..but like 7 went blank or somethin...idk...oh well i will check tomorrow....
great job by the way..nice name BORIS hehe |
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19-04-2003, 07:53 | #53 |
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ah, it on and off.. this geo thing.
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19-04-2003, 22:39 | #54 |
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wow......that was just wow...
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21-04-2003, 02:02 | #55 |
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rh2k, that's good interpretation....but, not what i hav in mind....i always get caught up in real/surreal things when i write....i know it's kindda confusing...and i promise that from now on, the story will be in linear narrative...cus i start to get confused myself.....and i hope the story would 'kindda' explain it to u later.....^_^
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21-04-2003, 02:34 | #56 |
Great to finally be back.
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LOl....
sorry YLuelniaa and uhaku, been really really busy. Im back now tho, and gonna be working on my story, and willing to still help when ya need it uhaku
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21-04-2003, 04:27 | #57 |
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nice fanfic!
Although I think it's a little bit weird...well who knows...maybe she fired somewhere else...I thought Yulia was the one that got shot...but well I can always be wrong...
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21-04-2003, 04:45 | #58 |
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'weird'..lol, i like that!
the chapter 1 and 7 were the ones i wrote first. i tried switching roles...experiment with the story. and no, they didn't fire somewhere else, but at their heads.. ^_^ wooo-hooo, tranz is back!!! |
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21-04-2003, 12:19 | #59 |
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ok...some new update...i put up part 8-11 now. not edited yet. the editor disappeared again. anyway, hope the grammar wasn't too bad for u to read.
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21-04-2003, 14:02 | #60 |
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*scampers off to read*
Yay! EDIT: You need to continue. Now. Also, my offer still stands. Email me about it if you wanna take me up on it. |
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