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20-11-2003, 02:12 | #1 |
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Calling Into The Darkness
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20-11-2003, 02:15 | #2 |
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that is so touching parrish!
i especially liked the first stanza. the whole "not even an echo" line really got to me. really nice! |
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20-11-2003, 02:48 | #3 |
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I really feel the entire thing, but I think my favorite is the last one. It shows defiance and the only way to go down is to go down fighting.
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20-11-2003, 07:12 | #4 |
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wow..this is so powerful parrish.. *hugs*
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20-11-2003, 07:51 | #5 |
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That was nice Parrish...short but it made a strong impact.
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20-11-2003, 16:58 | #6 |
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Thanks gang.
I've always been big on going down fighting, and not giving up even when you *know* you are going to lose. I guess it shows. Parrish |
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20-11-2003, 20:26 | #7 |
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Wow Parrish. That was really good and had a good message. I like the last two lines the best. Hope all is well with you after reading this poem! *check your PMs*
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