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Old 23-06-2003, 16:08   #1
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You're not evil

Listen to me
take that stake from your heart
you aren't some monster
that deserves to be slain.

You're not evil
no, you're not evil
if you are, we all are
the things we do for love.

It's easy to criticize
and to demonize
when you're an outsider
looking in.

But you aren't evil
no you aren't evil
if you are, we all are
the things we do for love.

They bark at you
like angry dogs
but they'll never scale
the walls of your heart.

You aren't evil
not ever evil
if you are, we all are
the things we do for love.

6/23/03
Parrish

This one was started a *long* time ago. I was digging through old papers, found this, and started working on it. I'm still not sure if it works, though. I'm so bad at judging my own work.
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Old 23-06-2003, 16:15   #2
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Thank you for posting this parrish.
I was able to connect to it, and I appreciate that, very much.
*hugs*
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Old 23-06-2003, 16:27   #3
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I think that its very good *gg* and touching...your really a great writer *smile*
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Old 23-06-2003, 17:34   #4
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*hugs back*

Not a problem, Ripp.

And thanks, Lena410. It's always nice to get praise from a writer I respect, who also happens to be a very good friend.

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Old 23-06-2003, 19:45   #5
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ouch!!!
nice lines....

tnx parrish
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Old 24-06-2003, 06:58   #6
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They bark at you
like angry dogs
but they'll never scale
the walls of your heart.
This is an awesome line.. I can't seem to get it out of my head... thought-provoking... nice job parrish
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Old 24-06-2003, 07:23   #7
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Love should be selfless, but it becomes selfish.
Prying eyes should look upon themselves as opposed to others.
Bleeding hearts won't bleed forever. They'll bleed dry, or they'll heal with scars. Maybe, they'll simply remain unblemished.

We're all alone in the world. But we're all alone together.

It was a good-hearted poem. *Smile. Thumbs up.*

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Tiredly leaving,
Another today,
Again tomorrow
Together dismay,
And raining sorrow.


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Old 16-07-2003, 11:42   #8
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[font=garamond]this world is cruel and unfair

but I'd rather be in it
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