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23-06-2003, 16:08 | #1 |
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You're not evil
Listen to me
take that stake from your heart you aren't some monster that deserves to be slain. You're not evil no, you're not evil if you are, we all are the things we do for love. It's easy to criticize and to demonize when you're an outsider looking in. But you aren't evil no you aren't evil if you are, we all are the things we do for love. They bark at you like angry dogs but they'll never scale the walls of your heart. You aren't evil not ever evil if you are, we all are the things we do for love. 6/23/03 Parrish This one was started a *long* time ago. I was digging through old papers, found this, and started working on it. I'm still not sure if it works, though. I'm so bad at judging my own work. |
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23-06-2003, 16:15 | #2 |
Your Distraction
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Thank you for posting this parrish.
I was able to connect to it, and I appreciate that, very much. *hugs* |
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23-06-2003, 16:27 | #3 |
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I think that its very good *gg* and touching...your really a great writer *smile*
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23-06-2003, 17:34 | #4 |
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*hugs back*
Not a problem, Ripp. And thanks, Lena410. It's always nice to get praise from a writer I respect, who also happens to be a very good friend. Parrish |
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23-06-2003, 19:45 | #5 |
think again....
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ouch!!!
nice lines.... tnx parrish |
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24-06-2003, 07:23 | #7 |
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Love should be selfless, but it becomes selfish.
Prying eyes should look upon themselves as opposed to others. Bleeding hearts won't bleed forever. They'll bleed dry, or they'll heal with scars. Maybe, they'll simply remain unblemished. We're all alone in the world. But we're all alone together. It was a good-hearted poem. *Smile. Thumbs up.* ~Echo. |
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Quietly weaving, Tiredly leaving, Another today, Again tomorrow Together dismay, And raining sorrow. Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien. Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors... |
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16-07-2003, 11:42 | #8 |
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[font=garamond]this world is cruel and unfair
but I'd rather be in it[/font] |
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