i wrote this in my free time...hopefully it won't happen again!

[Arwen]

Times and Times...
Times to remember, times to live, times to forget…
Times to die, times that were never there…
Times when I wish you were here, but nothing can be done

Two pools and I swim in them, hopping this moment will be over soon
Two flowing rivers say there will be crying for you no more…
I’d like to embrace you lovingly now, but I only grasp the air with my mind…
I scratch to survive my grief, while your memories rip up my soul
that has disappeared so long ago…

Why does the ocean seem so quiet now?
Why is everything so still?
Why has the time stopped? Isn’t there anything else to see?
All is the same, still so unreal…

With one blink shadows start chasing me
They are asking me to go with them
To the nowhere…to where I now belong
How can I refuse?

All the lights go off…
Slowly vanishing into thin air..
Oh my innocent child…what have they done?
…Breathe….cause new dreams will follow your deep sleep…

But she won’t meet you there..
All you have is yourself, not your soul, not your body..
What else then?
What else then?

You are not meant to be anymore…
Fly away to the nowhere…
Your wounded wings will take you there…
…to the dark side of the moon..

Take a glance…
Look away
Say goodbye now…
Cause I won’t meet you there…

***
I was bored...and sick and at school.... and this was the result!

[mir]

Good writing!
it seems to me that when people are out of their normal being, they some how go up a spiritual level and when they are also able to express what they think at such moments then these poems are the result...
too bad though that there are only a few who can trigger that state of mind at will....
But if you are able then please....write some more!

[Arwen]

hey, thank you mir ...i really appreciate your opinion...i thought that it was completely not understandable...since i don't understand myself sometimes, but well it seems that someone liked the result of a weird day's writing...
... i write...sometimes...depending on my mood, but then those pages end up somewhere where i can never find them...i dunno...
and yeah, i totally agree with you...when people is like...when you feel that you are not yourself and spend so much time thinking, sometimes writing is a way to..free yourself, personally when that happens to me i feel like i am trapped...i dunno...i'm crazy...lol

so thank you again! it means a lot to me

Arwen

[mir]

any time....
*ggg* you should try writing when you're falling in love...
the most beatifull things come in mind then...:

[Arwen]

yeah...falling in love...*sigh*

well...now i'm in a weird state of mind now.....falling in...out...who knows which one..i wrote the "poem" or whatever it is while thinking about love...and the way I see it now...the way i feel it now...so you can guess.

well...someday when i'm happier i'll write something more cheerfull


may i ask you what was the first thing that crossed your mind after reading it?


Arwen

[mir]

Originally posted by Arwen
may i ask you what was the first thing that crossed your mind after reading it?
Arwen

my first thoughts were about someone warning to a loved one that this goodbye would be good bye for ever...
almost as if this person was about to die..

mir..

[Echoed]

I was thinking the same thing as mir, although, I'd say more of... Someone who's saying goodbye, not because they want to, but because they have to. A goodbye that implies forever, though not necessarily death.

Good read. ^_^

~Echo.

[Arwen]

Echoed ...welcome to my little world!lol
well....both of you got almost the same impression...different from what i was thinking...although i don't know exactly what i was thinking

i'd love to read something else from you Echoed, I really enjoyed the one about your little "speaking walls"

Arwen

[Echoed]

Originally posted by Arwen
Echoed ...welcome to my little world!lol
well....both of you got almost the same impression...different from what i was thinking...although i don't know exactly what i was thinking

i'd love to read something else from you Echoed, I really enjoyed the one about your little "speaking walls"

Arwen

Thanks for the warm greeting. ^_~

As for my writing, you can find a few pieces throughout the Island. Lol. I've posted in here several times. I'm just not that noticeable. ^_~

~Echo.