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20-06-2009, 06:09 | #121 |
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Hmm... I'd want more "oomph" in it. More bass. I'm listening to it with my in-ear ear plugs, and that's supposed to amplify bass in songs, but I kinda thought it lacked some bass ... a really deep and heavier bass, but like that ambient bass-sound-thingie you have going throughout the song. I think it would sound "fuller" with one more deeper layer of bass if you know what I mean
Besides that it's quite nice. I've been hoping you'd go for the sinister and straight forward electronic/ebm stuff, and so far so good ... only ebm requires vocals |
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20-06-2009, 14:08 | #122 |
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I've taken your advice and upped the bass a wee bit.
It's a simple bass pattern but it adds a a wee bit of depth to the song. I re-uploaded the track for you to hear. ps. i haven't normalised the track yet so it may seem louder in places. Trust me there is going to be vocals on these songs! I may be wrong but i think this CD is shaping up to be the best one! And then i will retire lol I think i'm going to stick to the lyrics i wrote for that song i want you to do some vocals on. i will type them up and send them to you. |
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20-06-2009, 16:14 | #123 |
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20-06-2009, 16:19 | #124 |
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Lyrics For "VAAN"
--------------------- "The emptiness That silent suicide when the joy of love and pain of hurt collide You feel torn so you look inside It's a secret you know you cannot hide You can't change now You've left it far too late It takes it slow within you to permeate And when you venture off lifes golden path This is what will read on your epitaph BORN-LIVED-AGED-DIED-WEAK... When Vaan died i cried When Vaan died i died When Vaan died i begged When Vaan died for death... ©June2009 |
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21-06-2009, 02:49 | #125 |
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Ah, now it's nuch better! Dear I say perfect?
Offtop: You know ... uhm ... I really don't wanna dissect your song here, and this is not a critique or advice or anything... -the extra bass was all I wanted, and I love the song really! - ...it's just one thing that made me curious; how it would sound without the drums, but only the hihat going (perhaps with snare drum as well, but I'd like to hear both) I'm imagining it would sound like a soundtrack to planet Arrakis |
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21-06-2009, 11:24 | #126 |
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Perfect? Yay!! I can celebrate extra today. =)
I've uploaded a version just with the percussion and no dance kick or drum kit. It's eerie. http://www.zshare.net/audio/6166295067dceb59/ |
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21-06-2009, 20:16 | #128 |
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Yay! so i takes you like the song? 8 songs for the new CD. i'm aiming for 11?
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22-06-2009, 01:25 | #129 |
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wow... u r a super great... i like all of them
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23-06-2009, 11:12 | #130 |
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thank you so much. I've defo developed i think over the past 6 years. I think i need to relax more in able to continue making music. Lyrics are becoming a very important part of my work again. I want to make some more powerful lyrics!
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23-06-2009, 19:09 | #131 |
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i'm also reworking an old song called Resurrection and using the recorded version but putting some electronic beats over the top. We will see how that goes. As always you will get to hear first =) =) |
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30-06-2009, 18:38 | #133 |
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i had a weird dream last night that i was a dance DJ. it freaked me out!!!
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03-07-2009, 16:41 | #134 |
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Click the link below... and click ILike (if you want to that is)
http://www.ilike.com/artist/AshMcAuliffe |
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07-07-2009, 20:43 | #136 |
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New Song. "Fractured"
Finished Today. |
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10-07-2009, 17:59 | #137 |
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Ok.
So i have decided to change the name of the album and the titles of the tracks. The reason being is that i came to feeling that the original titles were far too impersonal and confusing. The album is going to be called "Dark City" and the names of some of the finished tracks are as follows - *Fragile State of Mind *Hall of Mirrors *In The Future *Crystalline *Operate *Dark City *In Flux *Sirius (Alternate Version) *Fractured *Dead End Your thoughts and opinions are always welcome. =) If there is anyone who would be like to design the album cover please get in touch with me too. =) |
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18-07-2009, 18:54 | #138 |
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I want QueenBee to do a small spoken part on one of my new songs!
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19-07-2009, 15:35 | #139 |
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I just spoke to her and she's too embarrassed
And her voice isn't nice! And she knows you won't trust her on that, but she wants you to |
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19-07-2009, 16:12 | #140 |
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aww.
I understand. It would be nice to have a spoken part on one of the new songs... kind of in a similar vein to the telephone conversation at the beginning of Show Me Love... but darker of course |
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