When I Look Into Her Eyes

[Devilish Yulia]

the elevator scence *giggle* .... *reads chapter again* ............ yesh it was hilarious! very kewl chapter Parrish!!!

p.s.......im bak!!!!....its been a while......its good to be bak!

[angeljas01]

Riding shotgun, I'll never see that used in the same light again hehe Poor Patrick...actually him blushing so much is kinda cute.
Thanks Parrish!

[teeny]

Late comment.. I read the chapter a few days ago. Keeping the high standard for sure. Never heard of the term "riding shotgun", but didn't ruin the story at all.. since I understood the alternative meaning of it

[haku]

Yeah, i didn't know what "riding shotgun" meant either, and i didn't understand the alternative meaning right away... had to look up in the dictionary.
I just thought Patrick had lost his mind for a moment.

PS: All Parrish's stories are on the page in my sig now.

[teeny]

aww thank you for the update, parrish
I kept checking this thread and the site for days looking for a lost update
Now it arrived and it even had Numb in it.. I want to listen to the song right now

And I understood every single term in the story this time

[dare2dream28]

Yayy!! Parrish is baaaaccck!!!! *does new update dance* WOOOO!!! Have I told you how happy I am that you started this fic/updated it? LOL@Yulia!!!!! She is too funny!! She can always make me laugh, but at the same time I'm concerned and then I still manage an "awwwww" somewhere. GREAT update Parrish!!!!

Oh, quick question. I was reading something for anthropology today about Keiser studying the Vice Lords of Chicago in the 60s-70s...one of the leaders was named Shotgun. LOL Is that where you got Shotgun's name? Or did you already tell us and I don't remember?

[haku]

BAM *gets accidentally hit by d2d as she's enthusiastically doing the new update dance*

Welcome back Parrish!

Wow, so many different emotions in one chapter...

We smile...
We're worried...
We're sad...
We laugh...

I'm exhausted.

Great chapter.

[parrish122]

Chapter 26, "Almost Enough" is up.

And I actually got the name Shotgun from being on jury duty. It was the "street name" of one of the people we heard about, and I thought it sounded like a good butch name.

Parrish

[teeny]

yay a new chapter

poor Yulia and good thing shotgun is there to make her laugh a bit..

pirate's costume (trying to avoid too many spoilers )

[dare2dream28]

*dances around thread because of new chapter* WOOHOOOOO!!!!! Yay Parrish has a new chap---BAM! *rubs elbow* Owwwwwww. Whoops, sorry haku! Didn't mean to hit you in my excitement!

OMG LOL@Shotgun!!!! And LOL@Ivan's reactions!!! But awwwwww at Yulia for wanting, rather *needing* Lena there at that moment. Awww how sweet yet sad at the same time. Wonderful update Parrish!!

[angeljas01]

So it was Shotgun and Patrick who persuaded Yulia to go to the docs...I'm glad she listened. Thanks for the update Parrish.

[teeny]

oi
oi oi
Two chapters in a row and some really good ones too.
*OI* I forgot.. I'll miss reading the updates right away all next week

[haku]

Hehe Parrish Yep, i got a few bumps lately in this thread.

Oops, i missed a chapter, 3 chapters in a row to read, yay!

Wow! That last one was hot! *cough* It gave me a few mental images of Lena that prevents my mind from forming any coherent thoughts right now.


Edit: I just realized that i thought that Lena was bi in this story, but in fact she's gay. I'm always wrong with this girl! *bangs head on the table*

[teeny]

Edit: I just realized that i thought that Lena was bi in this story, but in fact she's gay. I'm always wrong with this girl! *bangs head on the table*

*puts pillow at table before head hits*
Awww haku.. at some point you will reach the higher stage where you give up trying to figure out what to expect
that being said:
noooooooo and awwwwwwwwww.. as one can tell I'm having troubles commenting the story these days.. the emotions are too strong for words.
oi, oh no, and aw just covers a small part of it..

*note to me: learn more words or replace with/add smileys*

[haku]

Originally posted by TLFdk
*puts pillow at table before head hits*

Awww, you're sweet. For you.


I'm just super worried now! And yeah, who knows, maybe it's the cell phone. *looks suspisciously at own cell phone*

[teeny]

any time, haku

Yeah, could be the cellphone

[dare2dream28]

And people wonder why I never got a cell phone. LOL j/k Anyway, this chapter was wonderful Parrish. So many emotions were evoked...I laughed (Have I mentioned how much Lena cracks me up? ), I worried, I awwwwed, and I worried some more. And holy freaken crap when I read your author's note about the "goodbye" thing, *I* started freaking out, but then I was like "no no no, remember, Barb is okay. She's okay." That song was so right for the moment. The emotions in this chapter were written *extremely* well and I could really understand how both characters were feeling. Excellent job Parrish.

[haku]

Originally posted by dare2dream28
And people wonder why I never got a cell phone.

You don't have a cell phone?! Madness! LOL What if a gator attacks you or something? :P

Well Parrish, i already told you what i think of the funny part so let's skip that.

The rest of the chapter is just mindblowing, so beautifully written, so emotional to read! You described so well what Yulia and Lena are going through. Amazing.

And that line Yulia says to Lena, about looking at her so she'll be the last thing she sees *if*... That was so moving, it brought tears to my eyes.

Thanks for that chapter and that wonderful story.

[Lena410]

WOW! I was soo hoping that Yulia would survive. You had me sitting on the edge of my chair

"Can I thank the person who decided I could live?" I asked.
"Certainly." Lucinda said, smiling. "When you get back, just look in a mirror and say, "Thank you"."

that kind left me speechless while grinning like a goof. I love the thought that that implies
god Im so happy Yulia survived *giggles*

[angeljas01]

more faith, more faith...thank you so much Parrish for yet another f-ing amazing fic. Yulia had a twin was a nice twist. Beautiful ending, thanks again Parrish!