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18-03-2003, 00:11 | #1 |
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Walls of Pastel
7th of January, 2002.
[font=Verdana]I slaughtered the whim of my sloth, The day before the last. It was horrid indeed, by troth! I'd laughed at my pink past And fallen o'er my mother's words As she told me, "No, child," Though I'd wanted t' see those wee birds On trees of branches wild. But it was never to be here; She was not to transgress. Hers was a girl's ultimate fear, Where e'en clouds could aggress. How sad the day when I would fall, While slipping from her hands As she told me of Heavens' call And their white hourglass sands.[/font] ~Echo.-[font=Arial]Noct.[/font] |
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Quietly weaving, Tiredly leaving, Another today, Again tomorrow Together dismay, And raining sorrow. Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien. Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors... |
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18-03-2003, 05:17 | #2 |
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That belongs in a poetry book with Frost and Thoreau! Beautiful use of word choice, structure, and imagery! Well done!
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18-03-2003, 05:19 | #3 |
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Hahaha... Good job Echoed!
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18-03-2003, 23:05 | #4 |
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I'm just digging up old things. ^_^' This was written over a year ago.
Thank you for your words. They are really very appreciated. ~Echo. |
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Quietly weaving, Tiredly leaving, Another today, Again tomorrow Together dismay, And raining sorrow. Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien. Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors... |
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