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24-05-2003, 03:10 | #81 |
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Oh my God! What a great ending!!! I read your story everytime it had an update, I don't write often but I had to write for this, that was just awsome!
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24-05-2003, 06:01 | #82 |
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Wow!!! Great ending parrish!! I was like "Lena, you go girl!!" lol You made Lena such a wonderful character--great job! Any future plans for another fic?
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24-05-2003, 06:16 | #83 | |
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24-05-2003, 12:54 | #84 |
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Yes my fanfic craving friends...
...I'm working on another fic.
So you won't have to wait too long before you get another dose. And, I can't say it enough, thank you all so much for the wonderful things you've said! Parrish, who can't seem to stop grinning lately. |
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24-05-2003, 15:31 | #85 |
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no parrish... u dnt hve to tnx us...
were the one who needs to thank you for sharing it with us... cnt wait for ur nxt fic... |
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25-05-2003, 15:21 | #86 |
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i really liked the ending, very original infact the whole story was pretty original with lots of different ideas.
my only criticism would be that u explain too much, if u know what i mean (dont worry, i'm not 100% sure what i mean!) but i think that sometimes the characters say thing that are already obvious. and out of 22 (i think) chpters, that is my only criticism i envy u for the way u introduce new ideas and never seem to be unclear about where the story is going. i myself go through stages of not writing my fic, just cos i get bored or am afraid of which direction to take it, incase i regret it. and finally, thanks for writing it. it was great to read and a great way to relax and take my mind of exams |
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25-05-2003, 17:58 | #87 |
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Yulia fan
The funny thing is I *do* know what you mean. I was working on my new story today and started cutting out whole paragraphs because I felt I was repeating myself.
It's always been a flaw of mine. Something I'll just have to keep working on. Thanks for your input. I'm glad I was able to take your mind off of those evil exams. Parrish |
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26-05-2003, 13:08 | #88 |
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I finished it, just sat there, and all I could think was, "Whoa..." (to channel Keanu )
Good job! |
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26-05-2003, 16:07 | #89 |
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parrish
i saw it cos i find myself doing the same! i find myself writing long chapters then deleting 2/3 of it. and as i said, was the only criticism out of 22 chapters thanks again, looking forward to ur next fic |
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28-05-2003, 00:56 | #90 |
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Yeah, Ripp's site is having issues.
I believe she said on another thread that it would be back up June 1st. She's also agreed to put my new story up on her site as well, and I've sent her five chapters of that so far. So....at least you'll have plenty to read when her site is back up! Parrish |
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28-05-2003, 03:38 | #91 |
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Five chapters?!?! *puts ice on black eye to prepare for all the squinting* LOL Woohooooooo!!!!
EDIT: Just read the chapters!!!!! WOOOOOOO I can't wait to see how this story goes!! And poor Yulia...so young, yet experienced so much already! Yet another wonderful story parrish!!! |
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28-05-2003, 05:13 | #92 |
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WOW.....i LOVE THOSE CHAPTERS.holy smokes women you sure can write...
Its just sooooooo sweet.I can't wait for more...thats all i gotta say |
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14-11-2003, 03:55 | #93 |
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For some reason I felt like reading this wonderful fic again tonight. I have to stay, after reading it for the umpteenth time, I'm still blown away by the whole thing just as I was when I first read it. For all of you who haven't read it, you better go read it now as you don't know what you're missing!!!!
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14-11-2003, 14:18 | #94 |
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*laughs* I was a little surprised to see life in this thread again! Thank you, Dare2dream. I am so glad that you still enjoy this fanfic. Funny, it seems like I wrote this one so long ago, but actually it's been about six months.
Time flys when you are writing like an insane person. Parrish |
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