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06-10-2003, 09:30
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
Posts: 3,272
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fuck/it
Yes. That's a name. Or maybe my mood. Take a wild guess. I guess I care no longer. I need some selfexpression or I'll burst. And yes, this is a vile copy of Echoed's style.
I've been mockedteasedhitspitangryfrustratedintears You've been [ blank ] I don't know how you feel anymore, I dunno if you feel anymore I'd want you to carry my pain I want to chuck out your heart and feed it to the wolves Just so that you know how I feel And they feed I want you to feel the sweet pain of the stygma Or just that you take a glimpse at me burdening them Be horrified, cry, I don't care After all I'm carrying this shame. Just [please] taste what's to be left alone To be mockedteasedhitspitangryfrustratedintears out of love Let me show you a portrait of love As soon as it grinned back at me with blood on its' teeth You know, that love that lifted me on its wings And soon decided to chuck me at the concrete Let me show [you] how sad it becomes When you're mockedteasedhitspitangryfrustratedintears by friends Yes, friends you abandoned for that cannibal love Friends you want back, friends that won't have you back Yes. It is a stygma. Come lick the blood off my hands. |
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06-10-2003, 13:36
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Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: North Carolina USA
Age: 54
Posts: 786
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Wow!
Intense...powerful...just damned moving. Ok, that's the opinion of the critic in me. The part that is your family/friend wants you to know I'm not going anywhere. It takes a lot to run *me* off, once I've decided that I care. *Big ol' hugs* (Just watch the broken ribs.  )Parrish |
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06-10-2003, 16:10
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
Posts: 3,272
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*Big cub bear hugs.* I know. Someone provoked my mood. Now I'm feeling better.
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06-10-2003, 16:25
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motylik
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: my own private world XP
Age: 38
Posts: 842
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It's full of emotions..intense...very good!
Good to hear you are feeling better now. 
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06-10-2003, 16:30
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we shout
Join Date: May 2003
Location: we shout
Posts: 3,632
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darje, .. bois don't cry .. they ignore ...
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I will forget my dreams Nothing is what it seems I will effect you I will protect you From all the crazy schemes You traded in your wings For everything freedom brings You never left me You never let me See what this feeling means |
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06-10-2003, 19:24
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I'm a Dust Bunny!
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Montréal, Canada
Posts: 2,729
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COPIER OF STYLE! *Gasp!* However, good stuff, baby girl. ^_^
Are we going with a THEME?! I came up with this while eating lunch an hour ago. (I'm at school. I'm so bad, logging on. Eh.) It's short, so no worries of yawning. Too much. (I used to play this game of answer-reply-prose thing with my buddy, Ranko. It was fun!) --- [font=Arial]YOU inteGRATE yourself ON the basis of MY love for your shot NERVES, when, in reality, I would rather you just GO find yourself someone else to FCUK up with YOUR lost sense of SELF . Don't you get tired of everyone whispering behind your back when you wash your hair with broken fingers and oily red bubbles? It's like when you wonder about the cracked shards of the six mirrors Yesterday shattered in your wake. It's all these images that morning brings to stinging crimson eyes and tired little breaths, ired little deaths. Watch out for those street needles, they've been used more than twice. Third time's always the charm...[/font] --- Yeah, if you don't understand anything, that's okay. I'm insane. -_- ~Echo. |
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Quietly weaving, Tiredly leaving, Another today, Again tomorrow Together dismay, And raining sorrow. Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien. Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors... |
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06-10-2003, 19:30
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the unattainable kish
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Buried Deep In Yourke Hunt
Age: 43
Posts: 2,527
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dark....
and LOL@ the first one  i likey
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07-10-2003, 02:11
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think again....
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: pinas
Age: 45
Posts: 1,323
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damn....so intense
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07-10-2003, 02:47
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Phanphic Phreak
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: "The Big Apple"
Posts: 109
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Hulk have tender side...
(Leaves soft kiss on Darje's cheek.)
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07-10-2003, 03:17
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
Posts: 3,272
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*Melts @ Me Am Hulk.* There ARE sweet guys after all!
Echoed, LOL. Yeah. Copier. DA! *Crazy.* denial, I might be a boi, but I also have feelings. |
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07-10-2003, 04:05
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keep 'em guessing
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: guesswhere
Age: 37
Posts: 739
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interesting....
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07-10-2003, 04:32
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viva la scientology!
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: surrounded by lunatics!
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 1,228
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That was amazing! Especially the end. Wow, i really liked it. Share more! if you want...
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07-10-2003, 06:00
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The Poke Master
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Washington, U.S.A.
Age: 36
Posts: 420
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Wow...That was cool, man.
 *gives Darsh a big hugh* Love ya, bro. ^_^ |
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08-10-2003, 17:29
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pie crust
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: where everybody knows my name
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 11,792
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Siskiaaaa
That was awesome, makes me wanna write *opens notepad - thank god for modern technology* I wanna see more of your work! Pwease?
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08-10-2003, 19:06
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
Posts: 3,272
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O_o The response. The resp-- THE HORROR!
Okay. I'll try and write more. |
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08-10-2003, 21:19
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kis$ it
Join Date: Apr 2003
Age: 40
Gender: Female
Posts: 5,125
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please do.
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