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09-03-2003, 01:22 | #1 |
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Again, Rain.
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Blue diamond, sewing the night, silver shadow, closing tight, a crucifix under a red light; the crimson moon, it's grey might, they truth relative, yet bright, dreams do not seem right; drowned indifference, broken fight, spilled secrets, lonely fright, a heartbeat with bad sight. What's your concept of straight, silent plight? And I no longer know ... ... what to think anymore. So ab-used, so miss-used. So confused .............. Used to, you set to. You Said Two ... [/font] (Written on 02/22/2003) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When did life become a game of chess ... |
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09-03-2003, 01:26 | #2 | |
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Wonderful!
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09-03-2003, 06:14 | #3 |
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[font=Arial]You said.
I bled. In your head. In my bed.[/font] Mahaha. Ahem. I loved it. ~Echo. |
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Quietly weaving, Tiredly leaving, Another today, Again tomorrow Together dismay, And raining sorrow. Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien. Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors... |
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nice... the 1-st part is wonderful %)
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11-03-2003, 19:47 | #5 |
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w00t!
Thanks alot for your feedback! ^_^ I've never really written before, and english is a second tongue to me, so i'm really glad you liked it!
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