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14-05-2004, 20:07 | #1 |
winter days ...
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poem - for the one who let me go
for the one who let me go
To you, My heart I gave, And now its pieces I'm trying to save On my knees at your feet You're trying so hard not to crush them Slowly walking on through For me you wont admit defeat And I watch you in adoration The path you have chosen Leaves me alone But I see your furtive glances I see your pain at my struggle I see you long to save me And I love you more Fragments of me Litter the floor Looking out on our separate horizons Cradled in my hands Is my last piece of you And I protect it My Life My Love My Light My Desire My Beautiful Angel I can remain in pieces But Of You, I will never let go |
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15-05-2004, 00:07 | #2 |
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aww its very nice! when reading poems i always look for lines that set the poems tone..and for this poem i really like "fragments of me, litter the floor" totally owns
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15-05-2004, 02:40 | #3 | |
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Veeeeeeerrrryy niiiceeeeee!!
And very sad too. I loved it, rosh especially this part Quote:
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15-05-2004, 10:32 | #4 |
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thanks nataku and staringelf
some days though she makes me so mad i just want to let go ... [we still talk way too often for that to happen because she insists she still needs me though she doesnt want to get back together] staringelf remember in one of the other threads i mentioned people think youre always strong thats why it cant be you can ever feel depression or great hurt ? so they run to you when they are upset yet when you need support they brush you off ... ? same case scenario |
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15-05-2004, 12:36 | #5 |
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Rosh I loved ur poem, keep on posting buddy... by the way who is "she" I know hmm amino nosy
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Все мы живем в наших собственных кругах и иллюзиях, и сомневается, что мы несем вокруг, только проявляют обман, что мы идем.. Есть надежда даже в безнадежных случаях Silver Vulgar Hero |
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15-05-2004, 16:35 | #6 |
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"she" is my ex. we were together 5 years.
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15-05-2004, 16:42 | #7 | |
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16-05-2004, 02:07 | #8 |
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* gives a big hug to rosh * it's ok rosh
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Все мы живем в наших собственных кругах и иллюзиях, и сомневается, что мы несем вокруг, только проявляют обман, что мы идем.. Есть надежда даже в безнадежных случаях Silver Vulgar Hero |
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29-06-2004, 07:09 | #9 |
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new day new poem .... wrote this one when i was at a very low point ...
untitled drank my coffee mixed with tears felt pain wash over me from all these years one by one each memory obliterated every beloved moment desecrated you walk away. this isnt fair youre not here. im not there my grip on my emotions fades into oblivion im nowhere. no salvation every thought of you a dagger of pain you cant put yourself through this again i cant be with you i cant live without you ive slammed into walls ive crashed to the ground no more you to break this fall no more love to be found tears streaming down my face flowing towards an ocean of forgetfulness each tear a snapshot from our life soon to evaporate into nothingness like us. we are no more then what am i still on this earth for ? i hurt you. there is no forgetting that isnt it better to remember and forgive ? youre still my whole life i would die for you but i wont live, if its without you shalom, ani ohevet otach ... mar'ne ke bad kya ho'gaya ? khuda haafiz, mere humsafar ... --rh 04/06/2004 |
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29-06-2004, 20:06 | #10 |
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that's beautiful, rosh it's the brightside to feeling down: when the feelings drive you to create something.
what does the bit at the end mean? |
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29-06-2004, 21:38 | #11 |
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cirrus thanks ... let me translate
shalom ani ohevet otach farewall, i love you marne ke bad kya hogaya ? what happens when we die ? khuda haafiz, mere humsafar god protect you [goodbye] my soulmate ... first line is hebrew, the last two lines are urdu / hindi |
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22-12-2004, 17:59 | #12 |
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rosh, I loved your poems! I cant even describe how great they are..especially the first one. It touched my heart deeply..
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