Yeah, what they all said!
Like I told you before, you get Lena's and Yulia's personalities established very well in a short period of time.
And it's funny! So many lines in this fic made me smile and laugh, I've told you several already. Another one is when Yulia freaks over the python, and Lena says he won't bite...not that hard, anyway. I giggled rather hard at that. Your character Lena thinks that is reassuring. But to your Yulia, it certainly *isn't*. LOL.
Keep up the great work!
Parrish