Unofficial site of group TATU


Unofficial forum of group TATU
Go Back   Unofficial forum of group TATU General Forum The Island of Arts


A neon ball (verse)


ReplyPost New Thread
 
Thread Tools
Old 10-03-2003, 00:38   #1
forre forre is offline
Primetime Anchor
 
forre's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Sweden/France
Age: 54
Gender: Female
Posts: 9,954

A neon ball (verse)

A neon ball in someone's hands,
With colours plays but gives no sense,
Remains cold, looks so tough,
So far it isn't touched by love.

You hold it in your hands and wonder,
Why it gets power of thunder,
Of storm and fire, leaving trace,
When moving closer to your face.

You feel the ball is warm and tender,
Its light makes darkness to surrender,
The devil has no place here.
My friend, the times of truth are near.

It's gliding down the right cheek,
Then left, and you begin to freak.
Familiar voice says "It's me".
Can you believe that what you see?
~~~~~~~~~~~
Olga | TatySite.net t.E.A.m. [ ritzer@hotmail.com ]

Latest News:
| Tatu gallery | Current News | News Archive

Last edited by forre; 18-10-2006 at 21:09.
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 00:41   #2
Echoed Echoed is offline
I'm a Dust Bunny!
 
Echoed's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Montréal, Canada
Posts: 2,729

I loved the imagery. ^_^ Very nice, forre.

~Echo.
~~~~~~~~~~~
Quietly weaving,
Tiredly leaving,
Another today,
Again tomorrow
Together dismay,
And raining sorrow.


Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien.
Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors...
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 00:42   #3
O-R-!-G-I-N O-R-!-G-I-N is offline
..=OwNagE=..
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: London, England
Age: 38
Posts: 159

Send a message via AIM to O-R-!-G-I-N
oh i believe what i see
where'd you get this from? very poetic.
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 00:47   #4
forre forre is offline
Primetime Anchor
 
forre's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Sweden/France
Age: 54
Gender: Female
Posts: 9,954

O-R-!-G-I-N, 1994. I wrote it some 9 years ago.
~~~~~~~~~~~
Olga | TatySite.net t.E.A.m. [ ritzer@hotmail.com ]

Latest News:
| Tatu gallery | Current News | News Archive
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 01:34   #5
O-R-!-G-I-N O-R-!-G-I-N is offline
..=OwNagE=..
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: London, England
Age: 38
Posts: 159

Send a message via AIM to O-R-!-G-I-N
Jesus! *oopz* :P
erm very cool, got anythin more to give?
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 01:45   #6
forre forre is offline
Primetime Anchor
 
forre's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Sweden/France
Age: 54
Gender: Female
Posts: 9,954

O-R-!-G-I-N, I don't know. Maybe I'll find something more in my papers as I lost the files on my HD due to its crash. Thanks anyway. Nice to recieve your compliments!
~~~~~~~~~~~
Olga | TatySite.net t.E.A.m. [ ritzer@hotmail.com ]

Latest News:
| Tatu gallery | Current News | News Archive
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 03:54   #7
FadingAway FadingAway is offline
безумец
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Boston
Posts: 193

Send a message via AIM to FadingAway
forre, well worded! As Echoed mentioned, the imagery is very intense and well balanced. I'd love to hear more!
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 20:36   #8
yuila yuila is offline
psychedelic girl
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: plymouth , england
Posts: 123

do you like my poem?


WE were all boys, and three of us were friends;
And we were more than friends, it seemed to me: --
Yes, we were more than brothers then, we three. . . .
Brothers? . . . But we were boys, and there it ends.

We never half believed the stuff
They told about James Wetherell;
We always liked him well enough,
And always tried to use him well;

But now some things have come to light,
And James has vanished from our view, --
There is n't very much to write,
There is n't very much to do.
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-03-2003, 22:28   #9
Angel_of_life Angel_of_life is offline
I'm not O 'fucking' K
 
Angel_of_life's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: ???
Gender: Female
Posts: 3,793

forre, great! u'r writing amazingly... i like ur poems...
yuila, u t fun %) y didn't i make the new thread? and the poem... frankly speaking, i didn't understand it well... but in general not bad...
~~~~~~~~~~~
~Life is beautiful~
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-03-2003, 01:38   #10
O-R-!-G-I-N O-R-!-G-I-N is offline
..=OwNagE=..
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: London, England
Age: 38
Posts: 159

Send a message via AIM to O-R-!-G-I-N
lol also like your poem yuila short n simple n with rythm .
(should of made a new thread like Angel_of_life said. .
  Reply With Quote
ReplyPost New Thread

Bookmarks


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
"tATu don't ruin our hopes" - Neon Mag sept.issue DinoBora News and Events 17 24-09-2003 06:16
A Quick Verse EeZeReal The Island of Arts 1 04-06-2003 03:17
No less and no more (verse) forre The Island of Arts 7 09-03-2003 20:22
Blurred & clear (verse) forre The Island of Arts 4 09-03-2003 00:08



All times are GMT +1. The time now is 19:04.




© 2001-2008 Unofficial site of group TATU

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.3
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.