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Old 09-06-2003, 19:51   #1
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The Battle Within

The Battle Within

the heaviness of self-doubt
threatens to crush her soul
she longs to shake the insecurities
deeply planted long ago

she struggles to breathe
in this vacuum of expectations
loathing her humanity
she tries to hide her imperfections

looking outwardly
searching in others' eyes
for who she is, who she should be
masking truths with well dressed lies

discovery threatens her world
fear wakes her sleep
can she swim in the deception
or will she sink in the deep?
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"Caterpillars turn into rare butterflies..."
~Chantal Kreviazuk~

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Old 09-06-2003, 21:59   #2
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dude, this deserves to be in a book

i've read it 5 times actually, and i really like it (that's a rare thing :P) so YAY!


but please, please PLEASE let us know what happens next (lol, don't bother if it's like, 5 years down the road :P) DOES she make up her mind and stick with it? what happens next?

oh, and if u've got any other gems like this, DO post

ps: i personally don't think that 'she' should look to others to find out who she is. girlfriend should look INside



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Old 09-06-2003, 23:35   #3
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wow, what a great poem. Truly amazing. Sad, but touching. I know how that feels. But I hope things are looking up now...
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Old 10-06-2003, 00:04   #4
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WOW *sits in chair stunned* that was just so....*trails off*..i can't explain it...

but do share more of your writings
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Old 11-06-2003, 15:35   #5
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Thank you skrt, YLuelniaa, and Bitty for the feedback! I do greatly appreciate it.

And as far as how she is doing now...very, very well! ^_^ I think that just maybe she will be alright.

Once again, thanks!
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