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09-06-2003, 19:51 | #1 |
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The Battle Within
The Battle Within
the heaviness of self-doubt threatens to crush her soul she longs to shake the insecurities deeply planted long ago she struggles to breathe in this vacuum of expectations loathing her humanity she tries to hide her imperfections looking outwardly searching in others' eyes for who she is, who she should be masking truths with well dressed lies discovery threatens her world fear wakes her sleep can she swim in the deception or will she sink in the deep? |
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"Caterpillars turn into rare butterflies..." ~Chantal Kreviazuk~ Last edited by volkotina; 09-06-2003 at 23:21. |
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09-06-2003, 21:59 | #2 |
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dude, this deserves to be in a book
i've read it 5 times actually, and i really like it (that's a rare thing :P) so YAY! but please, please PLEASE let us know what happens next (lol, don't bother if it's like, 5 years down the road :P) DOES she make up her mind and stick with it? what happens next? oh, and if u've got any other gems like this, DO post ps: i personally don't think that 'she' should look to others to find out who she is. girlfriend should look INside -skrt |
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09-06-2003, 23:35 | #3 |
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wow, what a great poem. Truly amazing. Sad, but touching. I know how that feels. But I hope things are looking up now...
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10-06-2003, 00:04 | #4 |
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WOW *sits in chair stunned* that was just so....*trails off*..i can't explain it...
but do share more of your writings |
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11-06-2003, 15:35 | #5 |
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Thank you skrt, YLuelniaa, and Bitty for the feedback! I do greatly appreciate it.
And as far as how she is doing now...very, very well! ^_^ I think that just maybe she will be alright. Once again, thanks! |
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