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16-03-2003, 06:55
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I'm a Dust Bunny!
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Montréal, Canada
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In a Box
[font=Arial]DISCLAIMER: This is not actually my mood. Lol. Just testing out the waters. ^_~
There's lots of sadness in me. It's all those things you don't see. What? Am I not good enough? Am I too good to be tough? It's the same thing every week. It's just too much to be weak. Just put on a smile, darling. They won't notice you falling. And I won't reach for your hand. My eyes, you know, are too bland. And I won't look for your arms. I have my own little charms. Tu ne comprendras jamais. Je suis seule dйsormais. Ce n'est pas trop difficile De s'effondrer sur mon оle. Je ne sais comment quitter. Je ne sais comment rester. Ce n'est que de la tristesse. Je suis une forteresse. Alors, laissez-moi dormir, Et laissez-moi dйcouvrir Tous mes petits dйfauts noirs, Toutes mes larmes, ce soir. Je nais donc plus rien а perdre. I have nothing more to lose. In a box Under locks Hides a smile Hides denial I'm flying I'm lying I'm crying I'm dying Oh well. Tomorrow's another day. There's only so much humiliation I can take.[/font] ~Echo.-[font=Arial]Noct.[/font] |
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Quietly weaving, Tiredly leaving, Another today, Again tomorrow Together dismay, And raining sorrow. Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien. Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors... |
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16-03-2003, 07:31
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Great to finally be back.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: New Jersey, U.S.A.
Age: 39
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Hey....
that was good, I liked it.
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16-03-2003, 08:14
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безумец
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Boston
Posts: 193
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I HOPE that's not your mood!
 I really liked how the French weaves into the story and continues the same feel, especially "Je ne sais comment quitter. / Je ne sais comment rester." Very sad story but very well written. On a lighter note, I knew you couldn't leave your iambic pentameter prose for long  Bottom line, excellent work! |
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16-03-2003, 14:23
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Участник
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Somewhere.
Gender: Male
Posts: 82
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Great piece of work, as always
[font=Arial] And you don't seem to understand A shame you seemed an honest man And all the fears you hold so dear Will turn to whisper in your ear And you know what they say might hurt you And you know that it means so much And you don't even feel a thing [/font] I just wanted to find one thing that was mine and leave this behind. But i cannot find my way to get far away and bury these days. Hee. (These lyrics are copyrighted, or something. Lol.) |
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16-03-2003, 16:59
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Primetime Anchor
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Sweden/France
Age: 54
Gender: Female
Posts: 9,954
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Echoed, The English part floats well. Thanks!
Damn! I don't understand a word in French. |
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