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17-12-2003, 23:05
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My poem for t.A.T.u
I'm a really big t.A.T.u fan and i wrote this poem. this is the first time i write a poem, so it might not be the best, its quite short and i wrote it when i was half asleep (it sounds crazy but thats when i get all my good thoughts and idea's) Anyways.. here it is.
With all the stars up in the night, I just want you to hold me tight, All I want is a little love, Just from you, The one I love, I just woke up in the middle of the night, And found nothing in my sight, Then I stared out my window, And saw the black shadow of the night, Then as the birds passed through the night sky, I felt the tears falling off from my eyes, Then I realize that you’re beyond my reach, And I still can’t carry on with my life. Without you to hold me tight, I see nothing but a dark black sky, But maybe one day I wake up at night, And find something different about my life, But now I go back to bed and dream off instead, And just hope for a change in my life. Hope you like it... russkayatatu: thanks for your poem, halfalien  I think it belongs in the "Island of Arts" forum, though ... so moving it there now ... ^_^
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Last edited by russkayatatu; 18-12-2003 at 04:04. |
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17-12-2003, 23:27
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Wooow.. that was really good! I like the middle part the most! Great rhyming
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18-12-2003, 06:30
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Yearning
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This was *really* good. And I usually do not like poetry, but this was really good. Conveyed a lot of emotions. Great job.
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18-12-2003, 20:07
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Last edited by halfalien; 28-01-2004 at 22:00. |
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28-01-2004, 22:00
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thanks..
i would also like to see other opinions |
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