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07-01-2004, 20:17
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daydreamer
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: U.S.A
Age: 43
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The mirror
Kind of weird...
Please comment. Thank you all! THE MIRROR The mirror shows this image Early in the morning, late at night. Always the same unfamiliar face That I can't recognize yet. People says it's my reflection That I look like this in real life But this is not my body! I just can't look like that. It doesn't make sense, The mirror is telling me a lie. The mirror in the room, And myself in the mirror? I thought I had changed…I know I had! But I look the same… It must be a mistake The mirror shows this image, It has to be a bad taste joke from life; Another proof of its wicked sense of humor... A total stranger pretending, trying to fool me I can't let this go further…It has to stop. That curve sick bitter smile, and the dark circles I thought they were mine for a while But where are the bruises and the scars? My broken soul is missing And also every single wound I got Every time my dreams were tore apart Whose's this body? It can't be mine… Untouched, unbroken, soft, perfect, alive. This body's someone else's The mirror is lying, this is not I I hate this mirror; I can't take its selfishness I want it to show the real me Body, soul, heart all in one. Everything I became is hidden beneath the glass What I am is faking, is disguised… I can't take it anymore… I want to see me, I want to be free! This pain, am I really feeling it? Is this blood mine? I'm just trying to fix me, but I feel drowned Somehow the rage is consuming all… Now everything's ok The mirror is shattered And the room is a big mess Here it is the real image This limp body, my reflection This numbness, the real feeling This is how I look like… I can't keep my eyes open But now I can see my real smile All is making sense at last And this mirror won't tell another lie... 01/06/04 |
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07-01-2004, 20:57
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Новенький
Join Date: Jul 2003
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It's beautiful
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08-01-2004, 05:59
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Yearning
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: USA
Age: 39
Gender: Female
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Wow. That was *very* powerful. Very strong statement and very well written.
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08-01-2004, 15:09
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Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: North Carolina USA
Age: 53
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Wow! *Very* powerful!
I particularly liked the line "Everything I became is hidden beneath the glass.". Great work Samegirl. I like this.  Parrish |
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08-01-2004, 15:32
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you'll need love
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Taastrup, Denmark
Age: 44
Gender: Female
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really good.. though it's so sad and heartfelt.
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 Really great, samegirl.. |
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