Fanfic - so far untitled

[|capricious|]

Oh I see...
Thanks for telling anyway.

[Yulia_Fan]

thanks for clearing that up Ripp

yeah i have been posting it on tatu.us/forum. as soon as they are caught up, i will begin posting chapter 13. it wont take long, they are currently reading chapter 10, and i will probably post chapters 11 and 12 later today

thanks for being patient guys. i have so far written chapters 13, 14 and 15 and they will b up soon.

i am not sure about where they will b up, that very much depends on Ripp and whether she wants to continue hosting my fic.

Forre previously requested that i post it here, which is why for a while the fic was in the first few posts of this thread. i thought that looked a bit messy, so i am thinking that i might start a new thread and post it all there, and have comments/feedback in this thread. (did that make any sense?!)

anyway, once again thanks for being so patient, u will b rewarded soon!! and in my opinion, its worth the wait!

[Yulia_Fan]

chapter 13 has now been posted in this thread:

http://forum.tatysite.net/showthread...7049#post87049

please read the first post, i would like all feedback in this thread please.

Ripp, u are more than welcome to copy and paste my fic to ur site

[|capricious|]

Hey Yulia_Fan...
I've given you feedback at the other forum..
But chapter 13 was great.. indeed!

I hope chap 14 will be up as soon as possible, and I know you have it
sooooo...please post it

[smilie faces]

AAArrg !!

It was about time you feed us with somethin' new!
I thought aliens came and abducted you!

It was fabulous..!! I like the turn you are giving it, not throwing them at each others arms at once.. it makes my cravings start rioting !! I luv it..

u rock my smilies !!

[Yulia_Fan]

flu0525 lol, yes i know u know that i have chapter 14! BUT i wanna write chapter 16, or at least start it before i post chapter 14. but i promise i wont make u wait too long

smilie faces yeah i was abducted, but hey, it wasnt so bad, they were generally rather friendly.

thank u both for the feedback, very much appreciated

[vicky7]

Fantastic story, love your dialogue it has a really natural realistic feel to it with great character detail. I also like the fact you haven't had them declaring undying love for each other yet and letting them fall for each other as time goes on.

Can't wait for your next chapters!!!

[Yulia_Fan]

thanks alot vicky7, i really appreciate such detail feedback new chapter will b coming soon.

[Arwen]

wow.....now that's interesting! LOL!!
I wanna know what happens...coll fic by the way

[ElectraCute]

Yulia_fan, I am so glad you are continuing your story.
I have now re-read it, and it’s even better the second time.

Actually, I’m no good when it come to giving feedback, I just want more.

But I really like the way you build up tension between Y and L, and I bet you will let them hurt each other really bad
Also I like your descriptions of their emotions. You’re balancing fine between a detailed description and letting us, as readers, do our own thinking.

I look very much forward to the next chapters.

[warx]

post 14 plsssssssssss...
pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls

like 13...tnx

[parrish122]

*laughs* I'm glad I'm not the only one who reread the whole thing!

I like the new chapter! And I think ending it with the line, "This is war, Katina" was inspired. That really makes the reader *want* to know what will happen next.

You are *so* good at hooking us.

Parrish

[dare2dream28]

You are *so* evil with those cliff hangers!!! LOL EXCELLENT chapter..well worth the wait! I can't wait for Chapter 14. But I have to point out one thing...now that you've posted your story on two forums, that's not one, but two sites we can post at to bug you with updates. Mwahahahahahaha. lol

[dare2dream28]

Originally posted by rh2k
Nothing new. They are gonna try to make eachother jealous once again. History repeats itself.

Ahhh but that's the fun in it! Don't be so pessimistic all the time!

[rivierakid]

Yeah rh2k, don't be such a downer! ^_^;;

And Yulia_Fan, glad to see you're still out there! ^_^;; Lovin the new chapter, and can't wait to see what happens next!

[Yulia_Fan]

chapter 14 is up...

but rh2k will have no doubt read it all before admit, ur just pissed that they didnt admit their feelings and make passionate love arent ya?! u want a sex story huh?! sigh...

glad the rest of u liked it, and thanks for the feedback, its very much appreciated.

enjoy the next chapter

[pacmangirl]

Hey, Yulia_Fan! I thought you had stopped writing your story or were just taking a long time cuz I always go read it on ripptyd's site, and the last chapter on there is chapter 11.
Anywho! Great story! I'm so glad I found the rest of it Please, do go on

[warx]

tnx for chap 14......

[Rachel]

rh2k I think you need to think before opening your mouth (or in this case typing.)

[dare2dream28]

"and ordered a box almost as tall as she was" <--LMAO! After having such a bad night, that really made me laugh. Thanks Yulia_Fan. I also have another reason to thank you...It's nice to read a fic where it's really drawn out like this...keep up the great work.