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02-04-2003, 07:03
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Shlapa sdelana ot masa.
Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 42
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New Fan Fiction: "Let Us Fly"
(sigh) I have been avoiding this for a long time...I don't know why. I started writing this quite some time ago, but never shared, because I mainly wrote it out of boredom and for myself. I never edited it...until recently. I tried to clean it up a lot and had a friend who encouraged me to post it. Then I got scared cause everyone had such amazing FanFic, lol, that I felt truly inferior,
 , and that I had the same ole type story. Then again I was inspired by the same song, Ya Soshla C Uma, so I guess that might happen. Anyway, everyone is free to read it. I have only posted the first 3 chapters so far. I have more on my computer, but they need to be polished, edited, and then actually put into html. But, I will be updating it on as regular basis as my workload permitts...that is if anyone is even reading it,  And please, I only am receptive to really nice criticism, lol. I have a very fragile ego, hehe. I was just having fun. Let Us Fly |
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02-04-2003, 07:44
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
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Malako, it's beautiful. Really. I loved it... it's said that an author can be the worse of critics and maybe that's why I can't give you such an objetive critic... but I loved it...
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02-04-2003, 07:50
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To Be Free?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: los angeles CA
Age: 35
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haha that is the same reason why i havent posted what i've written (out of boredom) so far. im kool with criticism, but not the really tough kind lol.
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02-04-2003, 08:29
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malinky's
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Portland, OR
Gender: Female
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Malako- Well, if this was done out of boredom, could you please be bored more often?! lol I really enjoyed the first three chapters and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
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02-04-2003, 08:50
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Uhaku's alter ego
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: yo mamma's fantasy
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i really enjoyed it. pls post more..and soon!! ^_^
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02-04-2003, 10:29
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*facepalm*
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Somewhere in Washington
Age: 43
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This is a great story! I like it! It's well-written and your portrayal of them is just too cute! The scenario between them is pretty original, too
 I definitely wanna read more. Nice writing! 
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I actually used to come to this forum because it was for t.A.T.u. fans. Now it's a cesspool of mostly smartasses and failure. Quite sad, really. |
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02-04-2003, 21:09
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Your Distraction
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Brunswick, Maine
Age: 38
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Definitely good. You must continue. Now.
 EDIT: Malako_zloye, check your PMs! 
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Still, you bolded all your best words, so they'd have something to wrap their mouths around --- I'll still say your name to fall asleep A cynic saying rosary; a liar in his make believe || livejournal || myspace || facebook me || son fic || website || Last edited by Ripptyd; 03-04-2003 at 00:21. |
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02-04-2003, 22:30
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Божественная красота
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Cape Cod
Age: 40
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,635
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wow, that was great........please continue it...
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03-04-2003, 00:23
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Shlapa sdelana ot masa.
Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 42
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Thank you
wow, thanks for being so nice, lol! I glad you liked it. So you want me to keep updating? I guess that means I need to get off my butt and edit. I am going to try to update in every other day or so, since I have little class work for now. But when finals start up, ha..sorry. Oh and did anyone have issues with the webpage layout? Anything about it bother them, make things hard to read? Thanks so much!
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03-04-2003, 00:39
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*facepalm*
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Somewhere in Washington
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No, no. The page layout was just fine for me. I liked it! The background image is one of my favorite pictures of them, too!
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03-04-2003, 01:38
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To Be Free?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: los angeles CA
Age: 35
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i read it yesterday but didnt have time to reply, its really good...keep updating. everything was good, except that it repeated itself in the 2nd chapter or 3rd, forgot which one. but other than that, great!
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03-04-2003, 01:45
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Божественная красота
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Cape Cod
Age: 40
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,635
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just the repeat in Chap 2
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03-04-2003, 02:08
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Shlapa sdelana ot masa.
Join Date: Mar 2003
Posts: 42
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Yeah, I corrected that repeat...how embarassing. Actually I am getting a new host, thanks to Ripptyd! Soo...we are working to make a nicer webpage. It should be good. You see, last night when I created the page, I couldn't check to see what I was doing, cause of the background and my super homophobic roommate. Gotta love those living arrangements! I can't listen to Tatu without her ebing all freakish on me...let alone look at pictures. Grrr, in my own damn room. Anyway, Ripptyd and "editor" will be helping me out in the future to make it better. It may still suck, but I will take sole credit for that, lol
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03-04-2003, 02:19
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Божественная красота
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Cape Cod
Age: 40
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awesome...be sure to inform us when the next chapter is posted cause i am really lookin forward to reading it!
I like your different take on the story |
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03-04-2003, 04:30
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Your Distraction
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Brunswick, Maine
Age: 38
Gender: Female
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*does happy dance*
I'm hosting it! Wooooo! LOL. And shush, it's NOT going to suck. It doesn't so far, and it WON'T! :P |
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Still, you bolded all your best words, so they'd have something to wrap their mouths around --- I'll still say your name to fall asleep A cynic saying rosary; a liar in his make believe || livejournal || myspace || facebook me || son fic || website || |
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03-04-2003, 04:32
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Jagged Circle
Join Date: Mar 2003
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I like it as well.
I'll edit it tomorrow. Prooooomise. (I'm a little swamped right at this particular moment. )
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03-04-2003, 04:45
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Moderator
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Москва
Age: 39
Gender: Male
Posts: 778
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Malako_zloye, I like it!
Good job.
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03-04-2003, 12:10
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Lena Fixated
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: United Kingdom
Age: 39
Posts: 42
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Ahhh...a tearful day has dawned. I am officially a tATu fanfic addict. (What am I saying...that's not a bad thing!) You think they a Anonymous Meetings for these things?
Oi. Either way...excellent stuff, Malako_zloye. Keep it up! 
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03-04-2003, 15:01
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Новенький
Join Date: Feb 2003
Posts: 23
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This is really nice, really sweet! It's great, keep up the good work.
And many thanks to Ripptyd and Editor too! |
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04-04-2003, 03:43
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Caterfly's
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: USA
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bleep
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