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18-04-2003, 14:07
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Drowning
Here is one of my shorter poems I thought I'd share with you all.
If while you were walking on the beach you happened to see me drowning would you stop to lend me a hand? If I did not have the strength to call out for your help would you be able to understand? Or would you whisper, "I love you" as you turned and walked away leaving only footprints in the sand? Parrish 8/16/02 |
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18-04-2003, 14:12
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Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: where everybody knows my name
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Wow.. what a nice poem
 Very sad
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18-04-2003, 14:36
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Thanks QueenBee.
Parrish |
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19-04-2003, 21:37
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To Be Free?
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: los angeles CA
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ouch.....thats harsh. i like it
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20-04-2003, 03:40
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Thanks Daydreamer!
If you think *this* is harsh, go check out my poem "You are in shadows". These both are poems I wrote dealing with the first woman I fell in love with, back when I was a teenager. As you can probably tell, it ended badly. I also had this drowning theme going on in my writing at the time. Parrish |
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