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Old 12-06-2004, 04:14   #1
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Talking From REAL High School Essays! Hahaha

This is the funniest thing I've ever read, and apparently it's real too. Taken from real high school essays:

High School Essays (Actual Analogies and Metaphors
Found in High School Essays)

1. Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had
its two other sides gently compressed by a Thigh
Master.

2. His thoughts tumbled in his head, making and
breaking alliances like underpants in a dryer without
Cling Free.

3. He spoke with the wisdom that can only come from
experience, like a guy who went blind because he
looked at a solar eclipse without one of those boxes
with a pinhole in it, and now goes around the country
speaking at high schools about the dangers of looking
at a solar eclipse without one those boxes with a
pinhole in it.

4. She grew on him like she was a colony of E. coli
and he was room-temperature Canadian beef.

5. She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like that
sound a dog makes just before it throws up.

6. Her vocabulary was as bad as, like, whatever.

7. He was as tall as a six-foot-three-inch reed.

8. The revelation that his marriage of 30 years had
disintegrated because of his wife's infidelity came as
a rude shock, like a surcharge at a formerly
surcharge-free ATM.

9. The little boat gently drifted across the pond
exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn't.


10. McBride fell 12 stories, hitting the pavement like
a Hefty bag filled with vegetable soup.

11. From the attic came an unearthly howl. The whole
scene had an eerie, surreal quality, like when you're
on vacation in another city and Jeopardy comes on at
7:00 p. m. instead of 7:30.

12. Her hair glistened in the rain like nose hair
after a sneeze.

13. The hailstones leaped from the pavement, just like
maggots when you fry them in hot grease.

14. Long separated by cruel fate, the star-crossed
lovers raced across the grassy field toward each other
like two freight trains, one having left Cleveland at
6:36 p.m. traveling at 55 mph, the other from Topeka
4:19 p.m. at a speed of 35 mph.

15. They lived in a typical suburban neighborhood with
picket fences that resembled Nancy Kerrigan's teeth.

16. John and Mary had never met. They were like two
hummingbirds who had also never met.

17. He fell for her like his heart was a mob informant
and she was the East River.

18. Even in his last years, Grandpappy had a mind like
a steel trap, only one that had been left out so long,
it had rusted shut.

19. Shots rang out, as shots are wont to do.

20. The plan was simple, like my brother-in-law Phil.
But unlike Phil, this plan just might work.

21. The young fighter had a hungry look, the kind you
get from not eating for a while.

22. "Oh, Jason, take me!" she panted, her breasts
heaving like a college freshman on $1-a-beer night.

23. He was as lame as a duck. Not the metaphorical
lame duck, either, but a real duck that was actually
lame - - maybe from stepping on a land mine or
something.

24. The ballerina rose gracefully en pointe and
extended one slender leg behind her, like a dog at a
fire hydrant.

25. It was an American tradition, like fathers chasing
kids around with power tools.

26. He was deeply in love. When she spoke, he thought
he heard bells, as if she were a garbage truck backing
up.
27. She was as easy as the TV Guide crossword.

28. She walked into my office like a centipede with 98
missing legs.

29. Her voice had that tense, grating quality, like a
generation thermal paper fax machine that needed a
band tightened.

30. It hurt the way your tongue hurts after you
accidentally staple it to the wall.
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Old 12-06-2004, 04:29   #2
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She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like that
sound a dog makes just before it throws up.
How romantic!


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Her hair glistened in the rain like nose hair
after a sneeze.
Oh, the beauty of poetic writing.


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The plan was simple, like my brother-in-law Phil.
But unlike Phil, this plan just might work.
This is actually pretty clever.


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The ballerina rose gracefully en pointe and
extended one slender leg behind her, like a dog at a
fire hydrant.
Graceful as ever...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

These must be real essay quotes, no one can possibly think these up on purpose!

Queenie, thank you so much for these!! I'll give you reputation as soon as I can, cuz it says I need to spread around some more reputation before I get back to you...
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Old 12-06-2004, 04:33   #3
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3. He spoke with the wisdom that can only come from
experience, like a guy who went blind because he
looked at a solar eclipse without one of those boxes
with a pinhole in it, and now goes around the country
speaking at high schools about the dangers of looking
at a solar eclipse without one those boxes with a
pinhole in it.
Reminds me of that time a man with no legs parachuted into our high school....seriously.

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17. He fell for her like his heart was a mob informant
and she was the East River.
I think this one is actually kinda nice..... is it really that bad?

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20. The plan was simple, like my brother-in-law Phil.
But unlike Phil, this plan just might work.
this one's clever too

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22. "Oh, Jason, take me!" she panted, her breasts
heaving like a college freshman on $1-a-beer night.
ahhh.... college
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Old 12-06-2004, 04:37   #4
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LMAO QueenBee!!!! Where the heck did you find those?! I laughed *so* hard at some of them!!!

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25. It was an American tradition, like fathers chasing
kids around with power tools.
What kind of messed up family did this kid grow up in? LOL


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18. Even in his last years, Grandpappy had a mind like
a steel trap, only one that had been left out so long,
it had rusted shut.
Reminds me of some people I know. LOL


Those were great QueenBee! Thanks for sharing!
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Old 12-06-2004, 07:45   #5
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28. She walked into my office like a centipede with 98
missing legs.
That was the best IMO
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Old 12-06-2004, 09:17   #6
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omg.. those are hilarious..

Quote:
Originally Posted by QueenBee
14. Long separated by cruel fate, the star-crossed
lovers raced across the grassy field toward each other
like two freight trains, one having left Cleveland at
6:36 p.m. traveling at 55 mph, the other from Topeka
4:19 p.m. at a speed of 35 mph.

23. He was as lame as a duck. Not the metaphorical
lame duck, either, but a real duck that was actually
lame - - maybe from stepping on a land mine or
something.
now those are interesting..

but aye.. that's the quality of high school essays? that's just sad
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Old 12-06-2004, 10:55   #7
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6. Her vocabulary was as bad as, like, whatever.
this one reminded me of clueless

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15. They lived in a typical suburban neighborhood with
picket fences that resembled Nancy Kerrigan's teeth.
hahahaha !

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17. He fell for her like his heart was a mob informant
and she was the East River.
this ones pretty cool actually ... i wonder why it was included

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22. "Oh, Jason, take me!" she panted, her breasts
heaving like a college freshman on $1-a-beer night.
muhahahahah !!!! experience talking there ?

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27. She was as easy as the TV Guide crossword.

i want to use this one on someone some day !!! =)
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Old 13-06-2004, 16:43   #8
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30. It hurt the way your tongue hurts after you
accidentally staple it to the wall.
Accidentaly, eh?
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