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22-07-2003, 05:27
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Новенький
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: pennsylvania
Age: 52
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she alone
She Alone~
In the darkness of the night...shadows dance by with the faded light Are my eyes playing tricks?..Quick take another look there she is...my object of desire...silently I watch. oh how i wish...she could see me.....Will she ever? Im too shy, not her type...so the story goes....on and onits neverending , like a jigsaw puzzle .with missing pieces ., missin the best part. ..So I know it can never be complete.., So .I dream of her lips.and what it would be to feel ..her touch to taste her the thought is just too much...forbidden love a secret crush...if she only knew my heart.....she alone ..invades my every thought...she alone...breaks my heart. |
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22-07-2003, 05:49
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: ON, Canada
Age: 38
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whoa thats so emotional ... makes me want to cry
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22-07-2003, 07:10
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Determined
Join Date: Dec 2002
Age: 45
Gender: Female
Posts: 252
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She Alone
That's very beautiful Kryss.
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22-07-2003, 08:24
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The Poke Master
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Washington, U.S.A.
Age: 36
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Beautiful...Simply beautiful...Like 0newinged said, very emotional, especially for me, since I've been in that position before.
Either way, great job Kryss! 
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22-07-2003, 08:51
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*facepalm*
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Somewhere in Washington
Age: 43
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wow...I'm in that position, now. Couldn't have been more accurate. Eh.
But, hey, don't get me wrong! It's very nicely written! Good one! 
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22-07-2003, 12:51
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Ferpectly Mornal
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: South Africa
Age: 41
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you certainly know
how to hit really close to home. That was a great piece you should be proud of yourself.
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22-07-2003, 15:46
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Новенький
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: pennsylvania
Age: 52
Posts: 23
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re: she alone
thanks...for ther responses, I wrote that late last night..was
just in a deep thought and it came to mind...I might add more and turn it into a song...but I might leave it..as it is..just as a quick rambled thought |
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22-07-2003, 21:37
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think again....
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: pinas
Age: 44
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whoooaaaahh!!!
y this?(if u dnt mind me asking) tnx for sharing it... 
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23-07-2003, 04:27
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Новенький
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: pennsylvania
Age: 52
Posts: 23
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re question
Been doing alot of reflecting about my past..and that came out...just kinda flowed out...reflecting can be painful yet inspiring..being here watching all of you post..poems and stories....is truely inspiring to me...even if i had to reach down in and let out things i tried to hide
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