| FAQ | Members List | Calendar |
|
|
10-12-2003, 00:47
|
#81 | |
|
keep 'em guessing
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: guesswhere
Age: 37
Posts: 739
|
aggressiveness.........
interesting. interesting indeed. |
|
| Reply With Quote |
|
10-12-2003, 01:43
|
#82 | ||
|
Yearning
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: USA
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,026
  |
Quote:
|
||
| Reply With Quote |
|
11-12-2003, 16:26
|
#83 |
|
Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: North Carolina USA
Age: 53
Posts: 786
|
Chapter 20, "The Truth Of Their Hearts" and chapter 21, "Totems" are up!
Parrish |
| Reply With Quote |
|
11-12-2003, 17:27
|
#84 | |
|
Yearning
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: USA
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,026
|
Okay, okay, I'm a little freaked out by something. The whole totem thing with the wolf and what Jayja said to Yulia...someone has said that *exact* phrasing to me about how they think I am. *raises eyebrow* Ooooookay, anyyyyway. LOL I laughed every time Yulia did the whole jaw dropping thing because I did it too while I was reading, it was cute.
 And yayyyyyy that um, well, things were said (don't want to spoil it for people who haven't read it yet!)  Wonderful two updates Parrish. Can't wait to read more!!!
|
|
| Reply With Quote |
|
11-12-2003, 20:00
|
#85 |
|
Determined
Join Date: Dec 2002
Age: 45
Gender: Female
Posts: 252
|
I am very relieved after reading those two chapters. I'll leave it at that so I don't give too much away.
|
| Reply With Quote |
|
12-12-2003, 02:37
|
#86 | |
|
iMod
Join Date: May 2003
Location: Normandie
Age: 54
Gender: Male
Posts: 7,839
|
Really nice chapters.
Ooh, i didn't see that coming for Jayja. Well, maybe i was a little overreacting about Yulia's violence, she's indeed very protective of Lena. But i do think there is a risk, she has a lot of anger in her, understandably, and if she's ever in a position where she could let out that violence i'm not sure she could control it and don't go "too far". I don't know if i'm making sense. She has to find a way to release her anger, she can't keep that inside her, that's going to destroy her, but in a way that will do no arm to anyone. 
|
|
|
~~~~~~~~~~~
Patrick | TatySite.net t.E.A.m. [ shortdickman@free.fr ] |
||
| Reply With Quote |
|
12-12-2003, 15:28
|
#87 |
|
Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: North Carolina USA
Age: 53
Posts: 786
|
Chapter 22, "All Because Of You" and Chapter 23, "Jayja's Visit" are both up!
D2D...well, you know how my characters like to run around in your head. Maybe they picked up something last time they were there and mentioned it to me. Haku....you make *very* good points. Yes, she's protective of Lena, but that isn't *all* of the reason why she reacted like she did to Warner's remark. Yulia feels safe enough to feel some of her anger, yet her anger scares her at the same time. Parrish |
| Reply With Quote |
|
12-12-2003, 16:14
|
#88 | |
|
Yearning
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: USA
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,026
|
You know, I *really* love Lena's character in this story. She is so understanding and accepting of Yulia. I am so glad that Lena just plays off Yulia's moods and doesn't get angry at her for her little temper. And Jayja, wow, never would've guessed, but I'm glad Yulia has a friend she can talk to like that in addition to Lena. Of course Yulia won't tell *everything* I'm sure, but it's good to know Yulia has someone else to talk to in case for some reason she can't talk to Lena.
LOL@your comment Parrish about your characters running around in my head. Tell them to stop poping up during class...they distract me from my oh so important lectures. hehe
|
|
| Reply With Quote |
|
12-12-2003, 20:16
|
#89 |
|
Determined
Join Date: Dec 2002
Age: 45
Gender: Female
Posts: 252
|
I was a little nervous at first, but I think that Jayja has turned out to be a very nice person.
|
| Reply With Quote |
|
12-12-2003, 22:24
|
#90 | |
|
think again....
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: pinas
Age: 44
Posts: 1,323
 |
big HUG for jayja....
 its getting better and better...... tnx parrish |
|
|
~~~~~~~~~~~
mY SITE |
||
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 05:48
|
#91 | |
|
Участник
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Where you are...
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Posts: 271
|
Parrish, thanks for the chapters!
|
|
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 06:33
|
#92 | |
|
iMod
Join Date: May 2003
Location: Normandie
Age: 54
Gender: Male
Posts: 7,839
|
My mind is such a wreck rigth now...
 Anyway, let's focus on the fictional characters, i've never been so happy to be able to do that. Chapter 22 was a wake up call for me! I don't know why but apparently i had taken for granted that their parents would be ok about their relationship. I really hope they're going to accept it, and even be supportive. The poor girls don't need that kind of trouble.  And that Jayja character is getting a lot of depth, interesting. If only i knew how to pronounce her name LOL 
|
|
|
~~~~~~~~~~~
Patrick | TatySite.net t.E.A.m. [ shortdickman@free.fr ] |
||
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 16:29
|
#93 |
|
Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: North Carolina USA
Age: 53
Posts: 786
|
I'd wondered when I logged on this morning why there were so few message notifications in my inbox. Now I've read about the doc, and I see why.
Should I continue this fic? Or has everyone's interest in it gone away? I would certainly understand, if reading Lena or Yulia's name is going to make you wince, why you might not want to continue reading. I've always hoped that I'd made the characters strong enough to stand on their own....but I can understand why that might not be possible for some people at this point. I've got two chapters written, that I'll go ahead and type up. I'll post when I've got them up. Just please let me know if there is still an interest. If there is still a fair number of people wanting to read it, I'll keep going. Thanks, Parrish |
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 17:07
|
#94 | |
|
motylik
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: my own private world XP
Age: 37
Posts: 842
 |
please continue writing. I don't see a reason why you should stop. But that's just my point of view. *shrugs*
|
|
|
~~~~~~~~~~~
"Asking the right questions will make all the doubts go away." ~ German teacher "Having the right doubts will make all the questions go away." ~ My best(est) friend ^^ |
||
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 17:46
|
#95 |
|
Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: North Carolina USA
Age: 53
Posts: 786
|
Chapter 24, "Love In Her Eyes" is up.
Yes, I said two chapters. But my boss didn't bother to show up to work, so I had to stay over three hours. Hence, I'm tired. *hugs Lena410* Thanks hon. Parrish |
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 17:47
|
#96 |
|
daydreamer
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: U.S.A
Age: 43
Posts: 181
|
I still want to read them...
Please continue. There are dificult times for us the fans because we don't know what to believe or not...But it has been this way snce i know the band so... |
|
~~~~~~~~~~~
[COLOR= "blue"]Hope is for those who still believe in dreams...[/color] things are getting desperate when all the boys can't be men everybody knows i'm her friend everybody knows i'm her man |
|
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 17:58
|
#97 | |
|
motylik
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: my own private world XP
Age: 37
Posts: 842
|
*hugs Parrish* no problem darling *g* my AAHIS *giggles*
great chapter *smile* |
|
|
~~~~~~~~~~~
"Asking the right questions will make all the doubts go away." ~ German teacher "Having the right doubts will make all the questions go away." ~ My best(est) friend ^^ |
||
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 18:03
|
#98 |
|
Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: North Carolina USA
Age: 53
Posts: 786
|
*laughs at Lena410's sweet goofyness*
Ok gang. As long as I have readers, I'll keep writing. Parrish |
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 19:06
|
#99 | ||
|
iMod
Join Date: May 2003
Location: Normandie
Age: 54
Gender: Male
Posts: 7,839
|
Quote:
I've always been able to make the difference between the fictional characters and the real ones, and i really need the fictional characters right now. Your stories are remarkable, they make me feel, laugh, cry...  Please continue writing them!
|
||
|
~~~~~~~~~~~
Patrick | TatySite.net t.E.A.m. [ shortdickman@free.fr ] |
|||
| Reply With Quote |
|
13-12-2003, 19:10
|
#100 | |
|
Yearning
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: USA
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,026
|
Hehehehe I was giggling right along with Yulia towards the end of the chapter.
Jayja cracks me up. I have to admit at first I was not at all pleased that Yulia had befriended her because of the whole drinking/smoking thing. But now, well heck, she's won me over. She cracks me up. And quit writing this fic?! NOOOOOO no no no no! Uh huh! No way! Nyet! Did I say no enough? LOL Parrish, I absolutely *love* this fic. This one is up there right with BLP for me, so that's gotta tell you how much I enjoy this. And what's this about the doc? I'm confused. I have no idea what that is. Anyway, Parrish, you know I will *always* be a fan of your writing.
|
|
| Reply With Quote |
   |
| Bookmarks |
|
|
Similar Threads
|
||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| The Princess and the Pauper (Fanfic) | vicky7 | The Island of Arts | 843 | 30-04-2007 12:49 |
| Eyes of Passion [New Fanfic, flash feature] | TaTu^HeRo | The Island of Arts | 2 | 29-05-2004 18:40 |
| Fanfic - so far untitled | Yulia_Fan | The Island of Arts | 206 | 12-12-2003 07:13 |
| New tatu fanfic "Desired Emotions" | Tranz | The Island of Arts | 84 | 10-09-2003 05:49 |
| Eccentric t.A.T.u dreams... | HomerunNell | News and Events | 27 | 20-04-2003 19:21 |
