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24-11-2003, 04:30 | #1 |
Your Distraction
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Tatu Fanfic - Going Home
Kind of a loooooooose "Tatu" fiction, I suppose. I only use the likeness of Lena, and I don't really mention much else.
I had spent a good 15 minutes doing what she did in my story after I got off of work the other day. And I wondered "What if I did it..." and I figure writing it is the best/safest way to experience and explore those feelings. http://ripptyd.bekkis.com You know the drill. |
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24-11-2003, 06:52 | #2 |
motylik
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wow..very powerful
I know those feelings..you described them very well..hope you alright *sad smile* |
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24-11-2003, 06:58 | #3 |
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That was beautiful...you capture the essence of freedom, I'm just glad you decided to write it instead. Nice work.
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25-11-2003, 04:40 | #4 |
keep 'em guessing
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deep!
really and truly, deep. i like it, despite its sad ending. nice, nice indeed. |
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02-12-2003, 21:44 | #5 |
Your Distraction
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Thank you for the feedback.
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02-12-2003, 22:11 | #6 |
kis$ it
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good story, short but intense. the details are vivid, enough to pull me inwards if only a few seconds.
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02-12-2003, 22:28 | #7 |
think again....
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wow...its deep....
well written RIPP....t tnx for sharing it with us..... |
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