Fan Fic: Let Us Fly

parrish122 · 14-07-2003, 15:40

*Raises both hands*

You are *so* right, Warx!!

Parrish

Bitty2002 · 14-07-2003, 20:39

*raises both hands and feet*
*jumps up and down* (wait that is hard to do with my feet in the air huh?)
Love is the greatest feeling EVER! I love you, my Caterfly!!

parrish122, *blushes* hehe, thank you so much, you are too kind.

And thank you warx and pacman!

|capricious| · 14-07-2003, 20:49

aww, it wasn't that corny..was it?
Anyway.. I didn't mind
I'm glad you're back..

post more as soon as you can...

volkotina · 14-07-2003, 21:59

Bitty- I take it your vacation/trip went well, eh?! Good to know. ^_~

Excellent, tremendous, stupendous, breath-taking, jaw-dropping, soul-stirring, mega-amazing chapter you have here. I loved, can you tell?! lol As far as corny goes, you can be corny all you like and I will be cobby. Your corny + my cobby= corncob goodness! (heavens to megatroid! that wasn't corny, now was it?!)

I am rather inclined to agree with you, Bitty, about love being the greatest, most bestest(yes, I know you would never use such incorrect grammar, but me likes the giddy, childlike feeling love induces in my vocabulary....so sue me! ^_^) feeling EVER!!! And since we are issuing shout-outs to loved ones...I love you, my Malinky!

Bitty2002 · 14-07-2003, 22:56

volkotina, (my caterfly), hehe hehe hehe

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Excellent, tremendous, stupendous, breath-taking, jaw-dropping, soul-stirring, mega-amazing

Riiight...you silly girl you. You corny girl would like this chapter...oh wait you the cobby one, hehe.

Heavens to megatroid...*rolls eyes* not that again, you are so crazy. But me loooves crazy. (;

volkotina · 15-07-2003, 00:07

Bitty(my malinky)- what...you no lika the heavens to megatroid?! Well, you are a mallard-chasing beauty....sooooo, I can forgive your ignorance and lack of appreciation for some of the finer quotations cartoons have given us. (:

I cannot wait for future chapters with more love, cuteness, angst, emotion, heart, tenderness, confusion, despair, hope.....the list could go on and on. Thank you for all the pleasure and joy you bring to all of your fans and believe me, your gift of superb storytelling keeps us craving more.

Bitty2002 · 15-07-2003, 07:22

volkotina, no, no I love heavens to megatroid! hehe, you just so crazy is all. And I only chased them a little! They were asking to be chased...they are just lucky I didn't have my sling-shot...(; juuussst kidding. And they were geese, hehe, I know they were mallards, but I just had to say that one more time (not too often someone shows me up damn it)

And I think you like to make my head big, sooo many nice adjectives. You make me blush. I think something else may be influencing your great love of my story, hehe. But thank you for saying such wonderfully beautiful words.

Bitty2002 · 18-07-2003, 02:26

Chapter 32 is now up...

http://perfecthost.org/letusfly/part07.html

But something really weird is going on...for some reason the main page has ceased to load. It comes up and a blank screen. Not to mention all of a sudden I am getting porn pop-ups on my site. It is seriously ticking me off. But this isn't happening to my personal site, run by the same host... I am hopeing it is just my computer and maybe I have some nasty adware. Or because the fan fic has more traffic, they are putting popups on it to make up for it?? I have no idea, *cries*

Rachel · 18-07-2003, 02:38

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Originally posted by Bitty2002
Or because the fan fic has more traffic, they are putting popups on it to make up for it?? I have no idea, *cries*

Yeah, that's what they do. Whenever a site is popular they use porn pop-ups to pay for the extra bandwidth.

I'll read the chapter now

EDIT: OMG, I nearly died when I read this! :

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"Like... touch you... lick you," Lena grinned.

*puddles*

Great chapter!

warx · 18-07-2003, 02:49

tnx for the new chap bitt....

parrish122 · 18-07-2003, 02:53

I just love this fic more all the time!

Great work Brit. You should be proud!

Parrish

YLuelniaa · 18-07-2003, 03:57

oy that was fantastic...hehe i liked how you ended it...leavin us on the edge of our seat...

you meanie you...oh and i love the editors note...it is a freakin funny word..

can't wait for more...but i dispise those damn pop-ups

Bitty2002 · 18-07-2003, 05:28

I apologize PROFUSLY about the pop ups, *cries* they piss me off to no end. GRRRRRRRR, see nothing in life is EVER completely free, hehe. Damn them. I guess it was too good to be true for them to remain the "perfect hosts" hehe. Oh well, I can't find a better one cause this one has unlimited bandwidth, not something I am likely to find better somewhere else. So anyway, I apologize.

pacmangirl · 18-07-2003, 23:26

Hehehe, horror flicks are always great

Very fun chapterBitty2002, always love the way your story plays with my imagination

Oh, I don't know if you fixed it or something, but the site works fine for me, no pop ups, no blank screen, just pure story

rivierakid · 20-07-2003, 00:39

OK, I just read chapters 31 and 32, and I have to say, the image of Yulia and Lena singing "I Got You Babe" to each other made me laugh out loud!

And you gotta love horror movies. Never really scare me, but I love how some people just get completely freaked at the slightest sound after watching them. Great stuff Bitty!

Bitty2002 · 20-07-2003, 20:16

Thanks for all the nice words.

I spiced up my webpage a bit, added a new little thing to it. Please check it out. It is a really cool link!! Thanks!!!

The next chapter will be coming soon, thank you!

Bitty2002 · 23-07-2003, 02:17

Chapter 33 is now up. Thank you!

volkotina · 23-07-2003, 23:31

Bitty- Excellent chapter as usual, my malinky! And what's this?! The "dynamic duo" have taken a MAJOR step. Me likes, me likes! ^_^ And might I add how refreshing it is to see an adult respond to the girls in such a positive and empathetic manner. You always give all your characters, even the secondary, such vivid streaks of color! I patiently await more!

elwolf_x · 23-07-2003, 23:49

Bitty2002, very nice and cute chapter, made me laugh a few times

it's nice to see the light happiness of the y/l relationship as well as some reality with olga, albeit positive reality.
i'm going to check out the new thing too btw

warx · 24-07-2003, 18:49

really really really nice....

tnx