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21-04-2003, 19:11
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Божественная красота
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Cape Cod
Age: 40
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wow..that last chapter was great...your grammer is fine...hehe...can't wait for more now....
*sits back and begins the long wait yet again* |
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21-04-2003, 19:16
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Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: The planet called earth
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uhaku, I want more now! lol
Your story is great! |
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21-04-2003, 21:21
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Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
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I`m speechless
Uhaku, what an ENJOYMENT your story was/is! I like your style, it is so fresh and differs from stories Going Mad and Nothing in Between (I like those too!). I really liked those surreal parts too. Stories should not be always "easy reading", linear narrative, speedreading text. Don`t give up your style! And what a sense of humour your got! Iґm gonna be your fan now and forever!
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22-04-2003, 00:37
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*facepalm*
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Somewhere in Washington
Age: 43
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This is really good! I keep telling myself I hope that no one has to die. I don't want them to diiiiiie, but, what can I say? *reminds self* It's just fiction. It's just fiction. It's just fiction!
 Their longing for each other is touching, but with a twist of pain, makes you definitely wanna read more. This is not a predictable story, I'll tell ya now! Great writing! |
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22-04-2003, 02:54
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shit happens :D
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Mexico Shity er City
Age: 40
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why I have this strange deja vu
with this story and fight club? maybe the surreal part has to be...anyway this story is great although I can barely understand it ^^
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22-04-2003, 09:20
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Uhaku's alter ego
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: yo mamma's fantasy
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 Thanks for the feedbacks, u guys. i'm really happy ppl enjoy it. and yes, i'm gonna kill them a thousand times over. No. just kidding. i'm not crazy.Fight Club? lol! u can be sure they're not the same person. 
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22-04-2003, 21:15
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It's Ms. SKRT To You :)
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Washington, D.C.
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uhaku darling, i'm such a big fan of '666'.
please continue this story.. becuase for some odd reason... i can feel this story. i can feel this plot. and who knows, i might end up actually getting so involved with it that i might cry @ the end (don't place ur bets, now :P) please keep up the wonderful work (and please continue to post up the chapters in bulk) until next time, -skrt |
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22-04-2003, 22:05
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Jagged Circle
Join Date: Mar 2003
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I'll be the temporary secondary editor until Tranz returns.
Finished editing Chapter 12. Fantastically written, as always. |
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22-04-2003, 22:17
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It's Ms. SKRT To You :)
Join Date: Dec 2002
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yay!
know when it's gonna be up? thanks Ed! |
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23-04-2003, 00:06
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Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Bucharest, Romania
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*sits in protest* Part 12, part 12, part 12, PART 12!!!!!!!!
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23-04-2003, 01:14
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Uhaku's alter ego
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Thanks to E, i got part 12 up already.
hope u enjoy it somehow. skrtfntcwu : darling? LOL, it sounded so cheesy i laughed so hard but thanks anyway! feel free to say it again any time.
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23-04-2003, 01:38
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Your Distraction
Join Date: Feb 2003
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Loved it! You absolutely rock, and I'm VERY picky.
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23-04-2003, 02:25
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It's Ms. SKRT To You :)
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Washington, D.C.
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oooh darling darling darling! oh how i've enjoyed ur fic! absolutley wonderful!
PART 12: the scenes are just so creative! yulia worked for at the opera? who knew! lena understanding it and translating it was brilliant- so touching. OH, and irina and boris were siblings? i guess i didn't read too carefully b4 (NOT true!!!!) now listen darling... one of the first scenes.. in the bathroom was classic. i loved the comedy. then the late phone call.. how fucking romantic was that?!? you could practically FEEL the sexual tension. oh, and most recently, their first kiss... how appropriate was that to take place as the applause went up?! ur choice at creating those pivotal scenes are just brill! bring on some more memorable ones! i loved it loved it loved it! thank you! -skrt (oh, and 'darling' is cheesy? PUH-LEAZE! use it more often and you'll see how sweet it is to say :P) |
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23-04-2003, 02:40
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Uhaku's alter ego
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: yo mamma's fantasy
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hey, Ripp, i'm glad u enjoyed it. really, cus i kindda
knew that u r picky. LOL! skrt - ur post was just too funny! like i said before i never write a love story. that's why i think 'darling' is cheesy. hey, thanks for really take time to remember those scenes, they were definitely my favorite ones.  u might not have idea how much it means to the writer. but it does mean alot to me, i tell ya.
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23-04-2003, 02:53
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It's Ms. SKRT To You :)
Join Date: Dec 2002
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awwwwwwwww... now THAT was cheesy! LOOOOOL! darling i'm just kidding :P
this IS a 'love story', just a deeper one.. a tragic one for sure, but i would also argue a phychotic one (for they have a pact to kill themselves). to me, it's a story of giving urself for one thing only: love. the story to me is more real than the one's i've read so far. none of the fics here deal with the human condition obsessed with being in love; atleast to me. romeo and juliet did it, and now our very own lena and julia do it i've enjoyed it so much and i have so much faith in you as a brilliant writer that i'll keep my eyes peeled for ur pen-name 'uhaku' 10 years down the road well done sweetheart, for ur fic so far has differed itself from the 'teenybopper' love story and has a more 'mature' theme to it (and i don't mean porn-like scenes) :P until next time sweets, -skrt ps: just thought i'd let u know.. ever since u called my use of 'darling'' as 'cheesy', i've gotten a craving for, and have ordered, a double cheese pizza :P hehehhe |
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23-04-2003, 03:06
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Uhaku's alter ego
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Quote:
and i'm sorry i made u ordered pizza. i hadn't had one in monthsssss. hope u enjoy it though!
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23-04-2003, 03:13
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It's Ms. SKRT To You :)
Join Date: Dec 2002
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*burps*
(looks and checks that noone heard her) damn that was a good pizza! now back on topic... how many parts left do u have? |
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23-04-2003, 03:20
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Uhaku's alter ego
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eww, what's that smell? (j/k) ^_^
right now i'm on something like...22-23, i think. but i'm rewriting the 13 now. ummm, i have this habit of going back to change things ... now that E offered to edit my story. i get even more nervoussssssssss .... shiver~~~ |
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23-04-2003, 03:24
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Божественная красота
Join Date: Jan 2003
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wow.......amazing... ohmygod...i want more..
i agree with everything that was posted above.. |
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23-04-2003, 03:26
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It's Ms. SKRT To You :)
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Washington, D.C.
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur parts are in thier 20's! (wait, that sounded odd... hmm...)
well, i hope they stay fresh, exciting, and oh-so-memorable! yay! how often may we expect an addition? u seem to churn stuff onto the site every 2-3 days. that's good enough (not for my fix, though :P) oh well, eventually they will all be on there and i can enjoy them as a whole. this E person sounds quiet intimidating as an editor. but that just means that she's good if she has you re-reading and re-writing. so props to the mysterious E erm, if u need another editor, i'm err, willing to offer my (limited) services. OK OK FINE I'LL ADMIT IT! I WANNA BE UR EDITOR JUST SO THAT I CAN READ IT FASTER! damn that felt good! ok... off to grab some ben&jerry's for dessert -skrt |
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