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16-03-2003, 17:33
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Сумасшёдшая!!! !!!!
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: UK
Age: 41
Posts: 721
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*wonders in* A little poem
It's no good I can't resits joining in.. I have many songs/poems I've written over the years. Here's a very old one of mine..
*********** We have are ups and our downs We have are smiles and our frowns We have arguments over nowt We always seem to fancy the same hunky bloke We take the mick out of each other We often drop someone in it with their mother We love to get drunk and party We always lead each other astray We scream, shout and get stressed out, That's what being friends is all about. (Nowt is Yorkshire for nothing before I confuse people) MD |
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16-03-2003, 20:41
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Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Boston
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Well if that isn't the truth about friends then I don't know what is, hehe. I like the pattern you set with the "We" and then having the last line change, like an indirect conclusion in just that pattern change in itself. The UK slang is a lot of fun trying to figure out as well
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17-03-2003, 01:38
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Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Москва
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Gender: Male
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Mad Debz, cool! I like the ryming (did I spell right?)
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17-03-2003, 02:37
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Сумасшёдшая!!! !!!!
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Rhyme/Rhyming Just an h off!  I'll post a better verse when I'm feeling braver! Thanks! MD |
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17-03-2003, 03:28
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OK, thanks..
hehe English was never my thing lol... I haven't posted yet, I'm afraid it will look small and weak compared to everyone elses magnificent work, but I'm gaining courage, expect one soon...
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17-03-2003, 03:54
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Сумасшёдшая!!! !!!!
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: UK
Age: 41
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One more
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 Go on be brave! Small doesn't mean weak. I have a short ones from my school days...SLAVES Slaving away all day and all night Longing for freadom to week to fight Aching all over, soars on my back Violently whipped as I walk down the track Endless sufering day after day Slaving away with out any pay Edit: Geting rid of the rubish MD |
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Mad Debz || Taty Mad w.A.S t.A.T.y || Club Member || "Wait and see, that's me! Pffft!" Last edited by Mad Debz; 18-03-2003 at 01:22. |
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