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Old 25-11-2003, 14:07   #21
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hope..there is still hope thanks to Y&L' connection..*it's like a lil light in the darkness*.
thanks again parrish122, for this great story.
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Old 25-11-2003, 15:23   #22
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I hope that dream really did mean something and Im glad that Ivan was not skeptical! Heres to hope!!
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Old 25-11-2003, 15:52   #23
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I'm worried about the word "benefits" too. *starts biting my nails* Lena will keep having dreams and help bring Yulia home.. right? *looking hopeful*
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Old 27-11-2003, 15:48   #24
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Chapter eight, "The Concert", is up.

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Old 27-11-2003, 16:30   #25
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Lena was very brave to sing that song. I'm glad that her mother didn't get a chance to hit the director.*l*

I hope Lena gets her christmas present too.
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Old 27-11-2003, 20:52   #26
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This chapter is so filled with emotions, i'm as upset as the characters... I wish i could give Lena a hug too...
And this chapter has no news about Yulia, we're like the characters, we don't know what's happening to her, and this is so worrying.
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Old 28-11-2003, 03:51   #27
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After reading that at first I was like maybe Lena's dad took Yul since he up and dissapeared then common sense kicked in and I thought Yul would know Lena's dad right? Anyhow, as hard as it is for me to read this story (considering all the recent kidnapping in the past year), I think it is very well written. How you show the bond between those two without Yul even being in the picture is amazing, and for once, Ivan is the good guy! Keep it up, and get that much deserved rest!
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Old 28-11-2003, 16:48   #28
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Chapter nine, "Missing You" and chapter ten, "Looking For Clues" are up!

And thank you, to everyone who has read this, and a double-thank you to those who have commented.

I know this is probably the darkest fic I've written, and isn't easy to read. So thanks for hanging in there with me.

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Old 28-11-2003, 22:02   #29
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nice chaps parrish...
porn tapes..............

cnt wait for more
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Old 29-11-2003, 04:55   #30
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Very well written and heart wrenching story. I hope they find Yulia soon. Looking forward to reading more.
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Old 29-11-2003, 05:09   #31
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Two very powerful chapters Parrish, extremely emotional.

The ninth chapter is heart shattering. You can really feel the torment in poor little Yulia's mind, thinking that no one wants her now, and that it's her fault because she's been a bad girl. Her abductor has managed to convince her that the people who do care about her don't and that he's all she's got. That's really frightening. Thankfully she still trust Lena, that's the only true thing that remains in her life. It's only in her dreams and unfortunately she doesn't remember them but any help she can get to stay sane is welcome, even on an unconscious level.
And the fact that Lena is holding her, hoping to bring her back from her dream is *so* moving. My eyes got wet reading this chapter.

The tenth chapter... how sick do you have to be to enjoy watching a tape where a child (or anyone for that matter) is being abused and even murdered!
I'm afraid that Lena *will* have to know, at least to some extent, what happened to Yulia. Not only to help Yulia, but also because otherwise Yulia, even though she trust Lena, will always have that trailing thought in her mind "Would she still love me if she knew?". Yulia needs to know that Lena knows, and loves her no matter what.
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Old 29-11-2003, 15:25   #32
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Chapter 11, "Christmas", is up.

And thank you all, for the feedback you've given me.

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Old 29-11-2003, 16:21   #33
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This is a dark story but there is something warm about this chapter. It's obviously coming from the interaction, the feelings between those three characters. You can feel love and genuine caring.
They are all feeling guilty about enjoying themselves when Yulia is not there, especially Lena of course, and i can certainly relate to how she's feeling, the guilt of feeling *any* happiness when someone you love is no longer there. (It's just occurring to me that the Lena in The Chosen is also feeling the same thing.)
And once again, we have a chapter with no news about Yulia, which puts us in the same situation as the characters.
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Old 29-11-2003, 17:28   #34
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your writting is extremely powerful, we can really feel the emotions of the characters and even share them too..
i really hope lena will help ivan to find poor yulia before the monster that kidnapped her put his hands on her little body or worst...
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Old 29-11-2003, 17:56   #35
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"I didn't know men *could* cook."

You mean they can?*lol*

I think it is very sweet that Lena would wait and that her mother and Ivan understand. Speaking of Darla and Ivan....
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Old 29-11-2003, 18:00   #36
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You mean they can?
I can provide you with a list of French chefs.
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Old 29-11-2003, 21:21   #37
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tnx parrish...
u knw wat...its knda freaky that ivan here is a nice guy....hehehehe

cnt wait fo the nxt chap
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Old 30-11-2003, 15:14   #38
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Chapter 12, "Once Was Lost", is up.

You might want to have your tissues on standby.

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Old 30-11-2003, 17:21   #39
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Thanks for the warning Parrish. I'm glad I got the tissues before I read chapter 12.
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Tears of joy!!!
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