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23-04-2003, 08:13
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
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Sucky prose...
So, you there.
Me here. You enlightened, and me in the dark. And what's the more suckiest That I can't even say my feeling Because if I lie you'd win And if you lie you'd win And what the hell? Don't you think I notice That your mind is as old as mine But your arrogance goes before my time started? It's a truth no one knows. It's a truth no one cares about. And it's a truth that's hurt so many people, That it has actually started to become a lie. sigh... |
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23-04-2003, 08:19
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Chaser
Join Date: Apr 2003
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Wow!
I don't have to wonder what that is about!
Good job. I like it! |
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23-04-2003, 08:33
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
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Heh. Thanks.
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23-04-2003, 16:50
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I'm a Dust Bunny!
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Montréal, Canada
Posts: 2,729
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[font=Arial]With a smirk on pursed lips,
With hands tied in red lace, There's yet a blade To cut wrists and binds.[/font] --- How about THAT for sucky prose. ^_^' ~Echo. |
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Quietly weaving, Tiredly leaving, Another today, Again tomorrow Together dismay, And raining sorrow. Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien. Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors... |
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23-04-2003, 18:17
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: 忍者村
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Makes more sense than my own.
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23-04-2003, 20:42
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censored and deleted!
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Germany
Posts: 629
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darje, nice poem!
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