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24-04-2003, 05:22
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Your Distraction
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Brunswick, Maine
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Fanfic - Go Away
New one part fiction. Has nothing to do with "Nothing In Between." I just need a break from that story every so often, to be honest. And this was a good one.
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Still, you bolded all your best words, so they'd have something to wrap their mouths around --- I'll still say your name to fall asleep A cynic saying rosary; a liar in his make believe || livejournal || myspace || facebook me || son fic || website || |
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24-04-2003, 05:53
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Very good, as usual.
Amazing how you are able to put so much emotion into so few lines. Parrish |
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24-04-2003, 07:03
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Божественная красота
Join Date: Jan 2003
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hmm...i didn't know what to expect...definitely caught me off guard...But I liked it
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24-04-2003, 12:00
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Lena Fixated
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Location: United Kingdom
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Awwww
Sad and beautiful. *Hugz to Ripp*. You talent fiend, you!
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24-04-2003, 19:03
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Your Distraction
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HomerunNell, Awwww thankies! *hugs back*
Glad you like it. 
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Still, you bolded all your best words, so they'd have something to wrap their mouths around --- I'll still say your name to fall asleep A cynic saying rosary; a liar in his make believe || livejournal || myspace || facebook me || son fic || website || |
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24-04-2003, 20:08
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Uhaku's alter ego
Join Date: Feb 2003
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hey, Ripp, i always love the way u described things. it's really very beautiful. ^_^
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Irina Slutskaya the champion of my heart I salute you! I know it's not the correct order of the colors of the Russian flag, but I want Irina in blue anyway. Yeehaw! |
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25-04-2003, 23:45
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Your Distraction
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Thanks uhaku.
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Still, you bolded all your best words, so they'd have something to wrap their mouths around --- I'll still say your name to fall asleep A cynic saying rosary; a liar in his make believe || livejournal || myspace || facebook me || son fic || website || |
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26-04-2003, 00:16
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*facepalm*
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Somewhere in Washington
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Your writing is so well written! Haha, I got an inferiority complex!
 *throws own notebook in a box*Seriously, though, I really enjoy your writing. There are a select amount of fics where I can visualize and feel what's happening in the story. If the character hurts, I feel their hurt. When something good happens, I feel their joy and it makes me smile! I really look forward to your updates and new stories. Not to mention your incredible varieties of web layouts!
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I actually used to come to this forum because it was for t.A.T.u. fans. Now it's a cesspool of mostly smartasses and failure. Quite sad, really. |
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26-04-2003, 14:45
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pie crust
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Very nice
And also, you write it so great.. the way you form the sentences.. yum yum ^_^ Are you gonna continue writing it?
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26-04-2003, 15:54
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Your Distraction
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Kouketsuno Rei, there's no need to have a inferiority complex. Believe me. No throwing the notebook in a box!
 I'm glad you few like it, even though I imagine most people were expecting some kind of fluff. I don't enjoy fluff too much because it seems so unrealistic. Angst. Must have the angst. Editor hates me for it, but I just smirk when she feels like stabbing me for it.
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Still, you bolded all your best words, so they'd have something to wrap their mouths around --- I'll still say your name to fall asleep A cynic saying rosary; a liar in his make believe || livejournal || myspace || facebook me || son fic || website || |
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26-04-2003, 16:01
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pie crust
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Ripp, you're right.. Stories without fluff are so lovely, more realistic
All relationships have their ups and downs, and some also end..  Well, it was very well written.. Don't argue on that 
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26-04-2003, 17:27
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Новенький
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I like it a lot. There is a time for fluff, and there is a time for angst... And all the time in the world for well-written works of either genre
In this case I felt the impact to be even greater because you don't expect that sort of story in Tatu fanfic. |
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26-04-2003, 18:58
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mmm...Yulia
Join Date: Apr 2003
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wow... really love the new story
it was quite short and yet so powerful. i agree with all the comments above, the way u write and describe things... its so detailed allowing the reader to visualize the scene. its amazing how u can really feel the tension between them as they are talking. i love it. i do have one complaint tho... it really makes u crave the next chapter!!! |
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26-04-2003, 19:08
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Your Distraction
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Thanks.
I really appreciate all the comments on it. Only problem is that there isn't another chapter for this story. It was just a one part thing for me to get my moodiness out. My writing is pretty open. You'll tend to know what mood I'm in by whatever you're reading. I'm blatantly obvious like that. LOL. |
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Still, you bolded all your best words, so they'd have something to wrap their mouths around --- I'll still say your name to fall asleep A cynic saying rosary; a liar in his make believe || livejournal || myspace || facebook me || son fic || website || |
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27-04-2003, 06:14
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You interested in one more comment?? Well you're gonna get it anyways, as Bart on The Simpsons would say, AY CARAMBA! that was great, sad yes, but great
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27-04-2003, 07:23
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mmm...Yulia
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i like that ending 
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