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20-11-2003, 17:58
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Infatuation
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My translation of STARS
Hello everyone! Please read my version of Stars. When I haven't got yet english album my imagination began to create its own things. So i translated Zachem Ya.
I. I'm a star, you are star we were ordered to burn Someone likes to betray Our adress of born Look at me, in my eyes Can you take my cold hands Take my heart for a while To protect our lands BE with you all my life- Now i'm wondering how Our souls are for love And it's always and now In the sky I want fly To protect our lifes Near you want to die To discuss our cries. Through my world only cold Here are we for a time Our souls we control But not wondering why We must revenge for us For us and for death It is not a surprise That we can't understand Everything is ok We must fight to defeat There are no angel things So we can be free Free from space Free from land But there is no place Where you touch my hand and... Chorus: Tell me for what I wait the call... For what the dumb clouds on my wall Fly to my soul from far away And melting.... For what the love touched our souls For what I cry by first hellos For what I want you just now... Don't know... II We perform our lifes on the stage of the world I look at your face But withoutyou cold Not to search, not to love, Not to spare and sleep... I will always love you And my love is deep... In the middle of life We stay here alone Between us is rain That is a stone We nee some much dope But the pulse is no... Your spirit is free And the fault is in me... So poor story... |
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired. (c)Robert Frost Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen Kann man uns am Himmel sehen Wir haben Angst und sind allein Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein (c) Rammstein |
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20-11-2003, 18:11
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pie crust
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belissa, I like it very much! Good job
 I like the line "And the fault is in me" alot.. It just sounds like.. very sad. I sometimes make my own versions of songs too. Maybe I will post them oneday 
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21-11-2003, 17:04
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Infatuation
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QueenBee, thanks!!!
So what do another ppl here think about the poem??? |
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired. (c)Robert Frost Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen Kann man uns am Himmel sehen Wir haben Angst und sind allein Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein (c) Rammstein |
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29-11-2003, 15:52
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Infatuation
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ok...lets discuss it...i want your critics...please...
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired. (c)Robert Frost Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen Kann man uns am Himmel sehen Wir haben Angst und sind allein Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein (c) Rammstein |
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29-11-2003, 18:08
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we shout
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And I like this part very much!
- Look at me, in my eyes Can you take my cold hands - |
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I will forget my dreams Nothing is what it seems I will effect you I will protect you From all the crazy schemes You traded in your wings For everything freedom brings You never left me You never let me See what this feeling means |
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29-11-2003, 19:17
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pie crust
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I like this:
"Near you want to die To discuss our cries." |
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Monika | TatySite.net t.E.A.m. [ <3 ] [ 11 ] |
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01-12-2003, 17:01
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we shout
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Tonight... I like this these lines:
- Through my world only cold Here are we for a time Our souls we control But not wondering why - |
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I will forget my dreams Nothing is what it seems I will effect you I will protect you From all the crazy schemes You traded in your wings For everything freedom brings You never left me You never let me See what this feeling means |
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