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20-04-2003, 00:11 | #1 |
the silent one
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look at me
look at me.
It was her again, who came by If she would only see me, Then she would know... I guess it will take some time, Her smile so kind Her hair so red, Burning like a bushfire Her eyes so green Like new leaves in spring She’s what I need. So now here I am, In a dessert of desire When I see her she's like a mirage Or is it me trembling at her sight? I’ve got to get my vision right But it is clear as glass Where others take her for what she was I will take her for what she might be I want her to belong with me. |
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20-04-2003, 00:26 | #2 |
Божественная красота
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very nice...yet so true so to speak....
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20-04-2003, 01:48 | #3 |
Determined
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Very, very nice!
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20-04-2003, 12:53 | #4 |
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Wow! I like this one. Anyone who has longed for the person they desire to *really* see who they are, will understand this poem.
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23-04-2003, 06:03 | #5 |
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*sighs* oh longing, bitter, sour longing....lol
hmm....love it! |
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24-04-2003, 23:46 | #6 |
the silent one
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thanks
thanks for reading and your responses
gives me a good feeling! maybe i will post some more one day. mir |
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27-04-2003, 22:19 | #7 |
the silent one
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I have
posted some more though in another threatclick here to see them !
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01-05-2003, 15:31 | #8 |
засланец
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bloody heal!
mir, that's reminds me my EXgirlfriend,but i steal love her...but she's not...
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