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28-08-2003, 14:36 | #1 |
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Emptiness
I want to speak.
I need to tell you how I feel. But the words get stuck in my throat and I choke on the silence. But even if I screamed until my vocal cords exploded. You couldn't hear me anyway, You are as deaf as I am dumb. Only emptiness remains. At least it replaces all the pain. Parrish 8/28/03 |
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28-08-2003, 16:04 | #2 |
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Parrish, I really like this one. Just few lines but they are full of feelings. I got the feeling that you are about to burst. And that your feelings are so strong that they choke you. So you prefer emptiness instead of pain? I`m not sure which one I would choose. Pain at least makes me feel I`m alive.
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29-08-2003, 00:43 | #3 |
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Depends on the moment. Usually I'd agree with you that at least the pain lets you know you are alive. But sometimes the pain can be overwhelming.
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29-08-2003, 01:17 | #4 |
think again....
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may i ask parrish....y r u in pain?
i mean...u hve someone that luvs u very much.... |
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29-08-2003, 05:31 | #5 |
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Short, but so full of emotion. Sometimes you don't have to say much to get what you're feeling out.
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29-08-2003, 15:09 | #6 |
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<sigh> Yes Warx, I am. But it's nothing I won't survive. Sometimes I fall into depressions for no reason at all. Just yesterday, when I wrote that, I'd had the bad luck of not being able to talk to anybody that I normally would have talked to.
Plus I'm fairly sure one person was avoiding me, and that hurt. So I, as usual, wrote about it. And thank you PT. As great a writer as you are, any praise from you is valued highly. Parrish |
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29-08-2003, 15:54 | #7 |
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Originally posted by parrish122
But sometimes the pain can be overwhelming. Yes, you are right. We have our limits and everyone`s bowl has a rim. |
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