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Old 28-08-2003, 14:36   #1
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Emptiness

I want to speak.
I need to tell you how I feel.
But the words get stuck in my throat
and I choke on the silence.

But even if I screamed
until my vocal cords exploded.
You couldn't hear me anyway,
You are as deaf as I am dumb.

Only emptiness remains.
At least it replaces all the pain.

Parrish
8/28/03
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Old 28-08-2003, 16:04   #2
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Parrish, I really like this one. Just few lines but they are full of feelings. I got the feeling that you are about to burst. And that your feelings are so strong that they choke you. So you prefer emptiness instead of pain? I`m not sure which one I would choose. Pain at least makes me feel I`m alive.
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Old 29-08-2003, 00:43   #3
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Depends on the moment. Usually I'd agree with you that at least the pain lets you know you are alive. But sometimes the pain can be overwhelming.

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Old 29-08-2003, 01:17   #4
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may i ask parrish....y r u in pain?
i mean...u hve someone that luvs u very much....
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Old 29-08-2003, 05:31   #5
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Short, but so full of emotion. Sometimes you don't have to say much to get what you're feeling out.
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Old 29-08-2003, 15:09   #6
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<sigh> Yes Warx, I am. But it's nothing I won't survive. Sometimes I fall into depressions for no reason at all. Just yesterday, when I wrote that, I'd had the bad luck of not being able to talk to anybody that I normally would have talked to.

Plus I'm fairly sure one person was avoiding me, and that hurt.

So I, as usual, wrote about it.

And thank you PT. As great a writer as you are, any praise from you is valued highly.

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Old 29-08-2003, 15:54   #7
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Originally posted by parrish122
But sometimes the pain can be overwhelming.

Yes, you are right. We have our limits and everyone`s bowl has a rim.
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