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14-07-2003, 02:30
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Yearning
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The sandbox scene was *so* cute. Yuli junior reminds me of myself when I was a kid. LOL parrish, I like how you really let us see how Y&L's friendship developed into such the strong bond we saw in FFY. *Very* nice.
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14-07-2003, 14:09
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Chapter 13, "When It Changed" is up!
And I'm glad so many of you liked chapter 12.  I admit, even *I* can't read the sentence, "The dark-haired girl promptly dumped a bucket of sand on the bully's head." without giggling.  Parrish |
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14-07-2003, 15:21
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think again....
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nice chap...though it made me angry a little bit(coz yulia's mom looses her mind completely) for hurting yulia and lena...
finally...they'r 2gether now... tnx again parrish |
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14-07-2003, 17:46
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Божественная красота
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awwwwww it finally happened...*removes glasses too wipe a tear*
I still can't get over that heartfelt scene...*sighs* |
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15-07-2003, 02:50
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Aww that was sweet of Lena to protect Yulia. *smirks* But if it were me, I'd just beat the hell out of the mom. LOL Glad to see how they got together. Who knew Yulia's mom could do something so wonderful yet in such a horrible way.
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15-07-2003, 03:16
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This is flowing so amazingly well. So heartfelt and sincere... 
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15-07-2003, 15:28
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Chapter 14, "Angels Rising" is up!
And no, this isn't the end yet. I'm *so* glad you all liked chapter 13. I'd felt that if I'd writen it right, that it would be very emotional....horrible and wonderful at the same time. It's so good to hear that it worked out that way. Parrish |
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15-07-2003, 16:47
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think again....
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luv this parrish...
"Where once an angel fell, now there are two angels rising." tnx for chap 14.... |
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15-07-2003, 18:39
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To Be Free?
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aww that chapter was so tear worthy, specially when lena took the jacket!! but im ok, im ok, i dont cry over things i read *takes a deep breath and relaxes*
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15-07-2003, 19:11
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Божественная красота
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*exhales* that was so good..those words she wrote to her mother...very powerful...the jacket scene..definitely added too the emotion..great job..and i am glad its not the end!
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15-07-2003, 21:36
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Ay ay ay, parrish, I don't know where you come up with this stuff, it's brilliant. It's... incandiforous!
I'm also glad it's not the end, phew!Oh, I've been meaning to say that there's this one song, "No Mas" by QBO, that makes me think a lot about this story.. so.. I listent to it everyday
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17-07-2003, 02:47
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..laissez faire..
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OK.. so I get lost for a couple of days and I come back to find this treat!! oh sooooooooo sweet!!
Parrish keeps rockin my smilies..!
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17-07-2003, 19:42
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Oh, I'm *so* glad you all have enjoyed this fic!
I should have another chapter out tomorrow morning. Real life decided to get in my way for a while. <sigh> Oh....and just you wait until you see what I have in mind for my *next* fic! It's going to be....intense.Parrish |
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17-07-2003, 21:07
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me cnt wait parrish....
"intense" is not enough... "XTERMELY INTENCE" is much better....
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18-07-2003, 02:39
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18-07-2003, 02:48
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*Laughs* Dare2dream28, I guess it's always good to be prepared!
I guess I should say, so nobody is confused, I still have a bit more to go in "Angels Rising" before I start the new one. That shouldn't take me long though. Parrish |
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18-07-2003, 14:16
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Chapter 15, "Discovering Heaven" is up!
It's also the last chapter in "Angels Rising". I hope you've enjoyed reading it, because I've enjoyed writing it! Parrish |
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18-07-2003, 16:29
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Прохожий
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That was one hell of a chapter.
Are you gonna start another story anytime soon? |
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18-07-2003, 17:47
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that was fcukin fantastic way to end the story in which we already know how it continued...the poem definitely was a surprising way to tell Yul she was ready...i just love it.
awsome job Parr...you the bomb diggity! |
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18-07-2003, 18:19
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Determined
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Chapter 15
I must say that that (the that, that thing looks strange doesn't it?*L*) was a perfect ending.
And with the other one you are planning, intense is always good. *clapping for wonderful work* |
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