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21-06-2003, 14:04
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Join Date: Apr 2003
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Ocean Lovers
I take you to the beach at night
we wear just shadows and moonlight Let's see what kind of magic we make. You put togther what was torn apart going deeper into my body, soul and heart I want to do everything with you. I feel and hear the waves crashing both of the sea and our passion we'll take this as far as it can go. I smell the salt of the sea as well as the love from you and me you know, like water we flow. Who knows where I end and you begin and I don't care who calls this sin because you sure feel like heaven to me. To the ocean's music we add our own I drink in every sigh and moan and when the tide comes, so do you. The sun will be up all too soon so we say goodbye to the ocean and moon but I'll carry this forever with me. 6/21/03 Parrish |
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21-06-2003, 15:31
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Прохожий
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Amman, Jordan
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 it's lovely... The words flow nicely... When I read it the second time this line just did it - it's perfect 'Let's see what kind of magic we make' I love it... What inspired this? |
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21-06-2003, 16:18
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*blush*
<Clears throat> Well, tomorrow is the ten year mark for my partner and I...so I was in a romantic frame of mind. I'm glad you liked it! Parrish |
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21-06-2003, 16:52
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think again....
Join Date: Mar 2003
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WOW!!!
very smooth parrish... tnx for sharing it with us... luv it... like it... |
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21-06-2003, 16:55
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Very nice parrish, I love it ^_^
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21-06-2003, 18:03
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
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Congrats, parrish! :P
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21-06-2003, 18:34
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~Ґa §фsHЈб § ъmД~
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Wow!
It's fantastic! I totally lovve it! 
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21-06-2003, 21:18
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wow that was great. i'm at the beach almost every day and it can be very romantic at night with the moon and all
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21-06-2003, 23:31
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<Big grin>
Thanks gang. It had been a while since I'd written a poem, so it's nice to know you all like it. Parrish |
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22-06-2003, 01:52
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Uhaku's alter ego
Join Date: Feb 2003
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i really, really, really like this one! ^_^
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Irina Slutskaya the champion of my heart I salute you! I know it's not the correct order of the colors of the Russian flag, but I want Irina in blue anyway. Yeehaw! |
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22-06-2003, 07:22
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That was very very awesome. I really loved the whole contrast with the ocean..
I second that conratulations
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23-06-2003, 16:10
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Run with me...
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Chester Springs, PA
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Parrish122
All I can say is, it simply took my breath away! **Blushing immensely**
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