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07-03-2003, 15:33 | #1 |
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Obsession
My soul contains deep hatred,
That's rushing through my veins. Dark night and sun debated, While I destroyed my isolated brains. Insanity that kept me chasing And seeking for revenge. Forced me to keep on racing With life I couldn't change. New drugs made me addicted, To pain and to depression. Yes, God you have predicted The consequences of obsession. |
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07-03-2003, 17:33 | #2 | |
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Hmmm, the idea is great. Just something stylistically that bothers me.
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07-03-2003, 18:15 | #3 |
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Thanks for your comments. I'll keep it up.
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09-03-2003, 00:10 | #4 | |
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devo4ka, u know that i like ur poems %)
and this one is really cool! i liked it very much! especially this lines... they sounds great: Quote:
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09-03-2003, 13:14 | #5 |
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Angel_of_life, Thanks a lot! I'm glad to hear that you like my poems. I really appreciate that!
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