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20-11-2003, 17:26 | #1 |
Infatuation
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Мой перевод ЗАЧЕМ Я
Когда у меня еще не было англоязычного альбома ТАТУ моя фантазия до того разгулялась, что я села и сама перевела ЗАЧЕМ Я, не знаю, возможно лучше было бы выложить на инглише, но я хочу, что бы вы оценили это первыми....где надо раскритиковали...Все слова по сути дела должны подходить под музыку...
I. I'm a star, you are star we were ordered to burn Someone likes to betray Our adress of born Look at me, in my eyes Can you take my cold hands Take my heart for a while To protect our lands BE with you all my life- Now i'm wondering how Our souls are for love And it's always and now In the sky I want fly To protect our lifes Near you want to die To discuss our cries. Through my world only cold Here are we for a time Our souls we control But not wondering why We must revenge for us For us and for death It is not a surprise That we can't understand Everything is ok We must fight to defeat There are no angel things So we can be free Free from space Free from land But there is no place Where you touch my hand and... Chorus: Tell me for what I wait the call... For what the dumb clouds on my wall Fly to my soul from far away And melting.... For what the love touched our souls For what I cry by first hellos For what I want you just now... Don't know... II We perform our lifes on the stage of the world I look at your face But withoutyou cold Not to search, not to love, Not to spare and sleep... I will always love you And my love is deep... In the middle of life We stay here alone Between us is rain That is a stone We nee some much dope But the pulse is no... Your spirit is free And the fault is in me... Вот такая печальная история...Зацените...Понрави лось-непонравилось.... |
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired. (c)Robert Frost Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen Kann man uns am Himmel sehen Wir haben Angst und sind allein Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein (c) Rammstein |
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20-11-2003, 17:43 | #2 |
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belissa, здорово! мне понравилось...правда я не знаю английкой грамматики, и мне не увиделось ошибок
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20-11-2003, 18:18 | #3 |
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U ve done such a good work ! ! ! *Congrats* |
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20-11-2003, 19:37 | #4 |
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belissa, умничка .
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21-11-2003, 00:06 | #5 |
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Хороший вариант, но рэп настолько бессмысленн даже по-русски, что с рифмой и со смыслом его перевести невозможно. Получился достаточно самостоятельный текст. Конечно хочетя сделать несколько замечаний,но поскольку других более хороших переводов не видел, оставлю критику при себе.
Если уж речь зашла о переводах, оставлю и свой дре-евний вариант: why am I so alone today? Why do gray clouds bring a rain? Why are they drifting from afar and melting? When love had only touched our hearts, I thought we'd never fall apart. Now recollecting 'bout us, I am crying. [пошла отсебятина] I've made mistake, forgive me please. There should be no more our tears. I understand all that u feel... It's my fault. How could it happen? Is it real? I ask you now just to trust me. And promise I will show you love Just don't go!! Хэпа нету, я его отказываюсь переводить категорически, по вышеуказанным причинам |
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El Infierno está empedrado de buenas intenciones... Last edited by Fiva; 21-11-2003 at 17:59. |
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Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired. (c)Robert Frost Erst wenn die Wolken schlafen gehen Kann man uns am Himmel sehen Wir haben Angst und sind allein Gott weiss ich will kein Engel sein (c) Rammstein |
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