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09-10-2003, 00:08
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
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my_tears
One wonders of the times in which you felt at peace, and why. Why that one thing that brought you so much happiness, is also that one that brings you so much pain.
And yet I wonder of those times in which you used to be half my life and the other half I exchanged for you is still struggling to come back. And still I wonder why did I have to love you of all people. My tears have your name imbedded. ifearlovingagaini'llbehurtagainiwon'tstanditagain To know I loved you and lost you, is more painful than the knife still stuck to my throat. |
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09-10-2003, 01:13
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keep 'em guessing
Join Date: Aug 2003
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i absolutely love this!
i'm feeling the pain and hurt in your words. it sorta relates to what i am currently going through w/ my best friend....... long story. a job well done darje. |
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09-10-2003, 05:54
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motylik
Join Date: Feb 2003
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wow..very intense..very good done! It's so thick with emotions..I'm still speechless..
*hugs* I hope you are ok. |
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"Asking the right questions will make all the doubts go away." ~ German teacher "Having the right doubts will make all the questions go away." ~ My best(est) friend ^^ |
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09-10-2003, 06:05
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Harrumph.
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Yeah. Thick with emotions is what I am. Thanks.
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09-10-2003, 06:51
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The Poke Master
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Yes...Very intense...Great stuff, man.
*another big hug* Still love ya, bro. |
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09-10-2003, 09:31
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think again....
Join Date: Mar 2003
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damn gril...u really hurt.......
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09-10-2003, 10:09
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Harrumph.
Join Date: Feb 2003
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Yeah, warx, but don't we all sometime?
Thanks for your kind replies.  Incredible what five lines can say, eh?I guess I'm left with more time to write.
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09-10-2003, 12:17
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Участник
Join Date: Apr 2003
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very honest darje
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09-10-2003, 17:06
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pie crust
Join Date: Dec 2002
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darje, WOW.. WOWWWW is all I have to say.. I absolutely love your writing!! Did you use to write before or something? Because that is truly.. WHOA. I hope you have soem more poems so that you can post them and show to us!
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09-10-2003, 20:29
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Join Date: Apr 2003
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very intense.
my fav line: My tears have your name imbedded. very very awesome work darje! 
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15-10-2003, 22:48
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Paris
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sincere and sensitive
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