|
You know, now that I have reread these two poems, I think that I like this one better. Well....I think this one is better written. I like the fact that the other one ends on a slightly more hopeful note.
Both of these poems remind me of something I went through, when I was 16. (Yeah, *way* back then. LOL).
You certainly know how to end your poems powerfully. The last two lines of this one really grab the reader.
Parrish
|