Thread: Blurred & clear (verse)
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Old 08-03-2003, 02:37   #2
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Though the structure is a little confusing, I can create an image from what you've written. And I like it. Very nice, Forre.

~Echo.
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Quietly weaving,
Tiredly leaving,
Another today,
Again tomorrow
Together dismay,
And raining sorrow.

Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien.
Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors...
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