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Originally Posted by showMElove2
Nah, I dont feel as if the fic is being told in the present, you established from the beginning that "old" Volkova was telling a story about her past.
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Right there with you!!!
But, if there are people that may have trouble keeping up with present and past maybe you could put in some narration from Volkova. You know, before each time we visit the past. Does that make sense?