I agree with
pacmangirl. Parrish, honestly, I really, really, REALLY hate to read, but I just can't stop when it comes to fanfictions, especially yours! You have a way with making your readers identify with the characters and utterly FEEL for them (not necessarily feel sorry for them, just plain feel for them). That's talent and I hope that you get that piece of work published that you were talking about because I know I'll sure as heck buy it and darn it, I want it signed! lol