New writers are always welcome vicky7! Well, I`m not a fanfic writer but here is some feedback:
Chapters 1, 2 and 3. It was awful to read. I steamed up about Lena. She is such a foolish lamb who is trying to lead a happy dollhouse life and be a trophy girlfriend. I felt angry and frustreated. Arghh! And of course I felt sorry for Lena bc of her perfect boyfriend and lovely family. "Love-making" scene was pitiful, enough daring and funny. So, summary of those chapters: I liked them very much!
Chapters 4 and 5. Julia came into picture with all her troubles and the fic got more interesting, so I would like to read more, please! And thank you for these five chapters, vicky7!
