Yulia_fan, I am so glad you are continuing your story.
I have now re-read it, and it’s even better the second time.
Actually, I’m no good when it come to giving feedback, I just want more.
But I really like the way you build up tension between Y and L, and I bet you will let them hurt each other really bad
Also I like your descriptions of their emotions. You’re balancing fine between a detailed description and letting us, as readers, do our own thinking.
I look very much forward to the next chapters.