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Story: "A Winter of Tears"
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29-03-2003, 20:32
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Echoed
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First off, damn well written. The descriptions are engaging and detailed. The structure of the story is interesting too. Switching points of view and such, for a taste of each person's point of view. There's a sense of temporary closure, and it leaves ample room for the imagination to pull what it wants from this story.
Briefly put, very cool. ^_^
~Echo.
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Quietly weaving,
Tiredly leaving,
Another today,
Again tomorrow
Together dismay,
And raining sorrow.
Le noir, la gloire... On se demande bien.
Mais comm' je t'adore, lorsque je m'endors...
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